Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) (![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
Entry tags:
log post II
third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
Sure, that'll do.
[Freddy says in his best upscale posh tone, also known as trying to sound as if you know what you're talking about. It's all in good fun though because he knows Larry knows this sort of thing is still a little foreign to him. Maybe the kid might never fully get used to be immersed in such plush luxury but then again if he did he wouldn't be the same Freddy Newendyke, right? Just as well, he doesn't think the old man could ever give up good eats in a greasy wrapper on dirty benches.]
I think I'm gonna have this.
[He points at a description in the menu. It's florid language for something that amounts to a four cheese ravioli with bacon topping and a side of chicken. It's not red meat however Freddy clearly doesn't care.]
[Freddy says in his best upscale posh tone, also known as trying to sound as if you know what you're talking about. It's all in good fun though because he knows Larry knows this sort of thing is still a little foreign to him. Maybe the kid might never fully get used to be immersed in such plush luxury but then again if he did he wouldn't be the same Freddy Newendyke, right? Just as well, he doesn't think the old man could ever give up good eats in a greasy wrapper on dirty benches.]
I think I'm gonna have this.
[He points at a description in the menu. It's florid language for something that amounts to a four cheese ravioli with bacon topping and a side of chicken. It's not red meat however Freddy clearly doesn't care.]
[Red wine in color and Red in name. Italian. About four years old. All minor details. What matters is that it'll taste good. It's not a beer in a bar in a City they don't intend on staying in. If there is a they after reaching their destination. Or dead. Hah.
However good this food will be Lawrence Dimick will still want a taco wrapped in thin, loud paper and foil.]
Sounds like it's right up your alley. [Though it isn't in a can. And no they can't fuck while eating that. Not here.]
I think I found mine.
[Here, he'll point to his own choice of grilled rib eye steak with potatoes au gratin and mixed vegetables.]
However good this food will be Lawrence Dimick will still want a taco wrapped in thin, loud paper and foil.]
Sounds like it's right up your alley. [Though it isn't in a can. And no they can't fuck while eating that. Not here.]
I think I found mine.
[Here, he'll point to his own choice of grilled rib eye steak with potatoes au gratin and mixed vegetables.]
Sounds heavy. Are you gonna save room for dessert?
[It's not a trick question...or is it? The kid's thinking of having a dessert but the real curiosity is what kind? He's not telling.]
[It's not a trick question...or is it? The kid's thinking of having a dessert but the real curiosity is what kind? He's not telling.]
I might.
[Is that the waiter? Ah. There we go. Larry's ready to give his order. After Freddy's since he's being the date. Oh yeah. And their wine.]
[Is that the waiter? Ah. There we go. Larry's ready to give his order. After Freddy's since he's being the date. Oh yeah. And their wine.]
I think you should.
[It's a hint, a little suggestion as he leans forward. Oh hey it's the waiter, he smoothly leans back. Freddy puts in his order for the food but he leaves his wine selection to his older and wiser date. But wait! At the last minute the kid adds this curiously named beverage to the ticket.]
This too, elderflower soda.
[Because it totally sounds like it comes from Middle Earth and secretly a boyish part of Freddy Newendyke hopes it does.]
[It's a hint, a little suggestion as he leans forward. Oh hey it's the waiter, he smoothly leans back. Freddy puts in his order for the food but he leaves his wine selection to his older and wiser date. But wait! At the last minute the kid adds this curiously named beverage to the ticket.]
This too, elderflower soda.
[Because it totally sounds like it comes from Middle Earth and secretly a boyish part of Freddy Newendyke hopes it does.]
[Ears perk up at those four words. Okay that'll wait some. Consider him interested though. Do they have? Chocolate? Maybe sort of vanilla scones? Something to go?]
We'll take water too.
[To wash it down. The table is big enough. Away their man goes.]
What was it that you were saying, pal?
We'll take water too.
[To wash it down. The table is big enough. Away their man goes.]
What was it that you were saying, pal?
About what? [Yeah he's teasing.] Oh about dessert? I just like a little sweetness now and then. Don't you?
[After all they've been through this is pretty obvious.]
[After all they've been through this is pretty obvious.]
Oh I know. Between you and me we should have a sweet tooth contest.
[Donuts, ice cream, milkshakes...though they probably don't have those here. Bet they have a bitching pie or cake.]
I'm glad to be here.
[At Aardvark Artie's. And here to eat food with the kid. They can keep saying shit like this. Another thing to be grateful for.]
[Donuts, ice cream, milkshakes...though they probably don't have those here. Bet they have a bitching pie or cake.]
I'm glad to be here.
[At Aardvark Artie's. And here to eat food with the kid. They can keep saying shit like this. Another thing to be grateful for.]
Yeah pour a little brown sugar on that and you're set right?
[Just a quip, don't mind him old man. As for pies and cakes, yep they absolutely have that, and also some kind of cookie baked into a pan and topped with hand churned ice cream some such. A lot of this stuff Freddy would consider overdoing what could have been a big old cookie dunked in a carton of ice cream, but he has to admit too the bells and whistles are nice when you can freely afford them. Must be something rubbing off of Larry.]
I'm glad to be here with you.
[Freddy amends even though he knows Larry means the same thing. Is it more rare when the kid says it?]
[Just a quip, don't mind him old man. As for pies and cakes, yep they absolutely have that, and also some kind of cookie baked into a pan and topped with hand churned ice cream some such. A lot of this stuff Freddy would consider overdoing what could have been a big old cookie dunked in a carton of ice cream, but he has to admit too the bells and whistles are nice when you can freely afford them. Must be something rubbing off of Larry.]
I'm glad to be here with you.
[Freddy amends even though he knows Larry means the same thing. Is it more rare when the kid says it?]
[More rare and more special. It's not those three words ("I love you") that took longer to say (than those other three words "I'm a cop") but it's there. It's apparent. The old man can see and hear it. Maybe it's because he's a seasoned, cock sure date all over.]
You got my number.
[Fine dining, brown sugar. Yep. The celebration keeps on going. Hopefully with less back pain in the morning. Then again Larry didn't tell the kid that he found a remote control Transformer car. Getting him something worked very well last time after Blonde visited. That's what? Three times now? It's still very unnerving.]
Everything seem normal at work?
You got my number.
[Fine dining, brown sugar. Yep. The celebration keeps on going. Hopefully with less back pain in the morning. Then again Larry didn't tell the kid that he found a remote control Transformer car. Getting him something worked very well last time after Blonde visited. That's what? Three times now? It's still very unnerving.]
Everything seem normal at work?
867-5309 right?
[The kid can't help but laugh at such a predictable punchline but look the old man was asking for it okay? Oh hey breadsticks. He picks one up to crunch off the tip.]
Yeah, pretty normal, no visitors. [No Blonde.] Thor didn't stick around.
[The kid can't help but laugh at such a predictable punchline but look the old man was asking for it okay? Oh hey breadsticks. He picks one up to crunch off the tip.]
Yeah, pretty normal, no visitors. [No Blonde.] Thor didn't stick around.
Should I change it?
[Now it's going to be stuck in his head. Fuck. Except he's laughing. Yeah, kid. He's laughing at that dumb joke because it's funny to him.]
Sorry. Bet that's a big disappointment.
[Yeah, Freddy. He's not stupid.]
That other guy too?
[The old bear pays attention.]
[Now it's going to be stuck in his head. Fuck. Except he's laughing. Yeah, kid. He's laughing at that dumb joke because it's funny to him.]
Sorry. Bet that's a big disappointment.
[Yeah, Freddy. He's not stupid.]
That other guy too?
[The old bear pays attention.]
Naw it's easy to remember, got a nice ring to it.
[If he had a cigarette he'd be pointing it at the old man but this is a non-smoking restaurant so fff. The disappointment over Thor's departure is kind of big but not fatal. Freddy will live.]
It's okay, but he was so fucking cool man.
[Er...what other guy? Oh...that guy.] Nobody new stuck around.
[If he had a cigarette he'd be pointing it at the old man but this is a non-smoking restaurant so fff. The disappointment over Thor's departure is kind of big but not fatal. Freddy will live.]
It's okay, but he was so fucking cool man.
[Er...what other guy? Oh...that guy.] Nobody new stuck around.
[It fits so perfectly to the tune too. A throwaway hit that packs a punch. Freddy didn't even sing it and now it's stuck in his head for God's sake. The old man can deal though.]
So I noticed.
[Looking at the man across the table he smiles.]
I wouldn't have told you like that.
[That he's good looking. Though Freddy is. He's gotta know that right? It's unbelievable to see some smug ass motherfucker strut on in and be so clumsy over it.]
So I noticed.
[Looking at the man across the table he smiles.]
I wouldn't have told you like that.
[That he's good looking. Though Freddy is. He's gotta know that right? It's unbelievable to see some smug ass motherfucker strut on in and be so clumsy over it.]
Told me what?
[Freddy asks like an oblivious kid or maybe he's just not sure what Larry's referring to with regards to that smug ass motherfucker. At least he wasn't a therapist...or was he? Freddy never dug deep enough to find out beyond he's a bird man. And unlike Thor, Reynold did not get to see Sam the toucan.]
[Freddy asks like an oblivious kid or maybe he's just not sure what Larry's referring to with regards to that smug ass motherfucker. At least he wasn't a therapist...or was he? Freddy never dug deep enough to find out beyond he's a bird man. And unlike Thor, Reynold did not get to see Sam the toucan.]
That you're good lookin'.
[Already the old man surrenders himself to the fact that Thor and all those super hero types get him off in a way that is beyond normal people. It's not really a contest more as something he recognizes and accepts because that's Freddy for you.]
Can't think of his name right now.
[Sure isn't Toby Wong.]
[Already the old man surrenders himself to the fact that Thor and all those super hero types get him off in a way that is beyond normal people. It's not really a contest more as something he recognizes and accepts because that's Freddy for you.]
Can't think of his name right now.
[Sure isn't Toby Wong.]
[Thor, Tony, Steve, Reeds, the Storms, they just spark a boyhood imagination. He could always count on them to be his friends in school whenever he had none.]
Oh, yeah. That was kinda weird.
[Talkin' birds and what not with Saya's brother, he didn't know she had one, one in the city, one with a mouth like that. As for his name, Freddy shakes his head.]
I didn't get one outta him.
Oh, yeah. That was kinda weird.
[Talkin' birds and what not with Saya's brother, he didn't know she had one, one in the city, one with a mouth like that. As for his name, Freddy shakes his head.]
I didn't get one outta him.
[Super friends like those never let you down. The Lone Ranger wouldn't do that either.]
Ballsy.
[As well as weird. Did the kid like it?]
Rey...Reynard? Reynold. That's what it is.
Ballsy.
[As well as weird. Did the kid like it?]
Rey...Reynard? Reynold. That's what it is.
Beats me.
[Have a shrug for your troubles, Lawrence Dimick. Now Freddy's kind of just looking at him funny. Why does he want to know, jealous? He leans in, one brow quirked up.]
How come you know his name? [Toucan play at this game.]
[Have a shrug for your troubles, Lawrence Dimick. Now Freddy's kind of just looking at him funny. Why does he want to know, jealous? He leans in, one brow quirked up.]
How come you know his name? [Toucan play at this game.]
[Here comes the wine. The glasses first then the bottle. Hold that thought, Freddy. One glass, two glasses.]
He was bothering me. Not the same way he was bothering you though.
[He lifts up his glass to look at the color of red against the light before taking a sip.]
He was bothering me. Not the same way he was bothering you though.
[He lifts up his glass to look at the color of red against the light before taking a sip.]
[Freddy takes his glass.] You don't know that, maybe you didn't get the angle he was working at.
[The kid waves a hand because seriously who wouldn't hit on a smooth motherfucker like this old man? Just look at the way he drinks his wine, smooth as shit. He takes a sip himself, oh wait weren't they supposed to toast?]
[The kid waves a hand because seriously who wouldn't hit on a smooth motherfucker like this old man? Just look at the way he drinks his wine, smooth as shit. He takes a sip himself, oh wait weren't they supposed to toast?]
[As long as there's still wine in a glass they can still toast.]
Or I'm not his type.
[Not like some floppy haired, soulful eyed sons of bitches.]
To a smart ass and this fucking life we lead.
Or I'm not his type.
[Not like some floppy haired, soulful eyed sons of bitches.]
To a smart ass and this fucking life we lead.
What kind of type are you?
[He had to ask, sorry old man. But really, what kind huh? Oh okay he can take a break from being a smart ass to toast. Freddy raises his glass and clinks it against Larry's.]
Amen.
[Does this count as saying grace? He gives the old tough guy a soulful eyed son of a bitch smile before sipping.]
[He had to ask, sorry old man. But really, what kind huh? Oh okay he can take a break from being a smart ass to toast. Freddy raises his glass and clinks it against Larry's.]
Amen.
[Does this count as saying grace? He gives the old tough guy a soulful eyed son of a bitch smile before sipping.]
Experienced. [Older.] Classic. [Throwback.] Something like that.
[Clink of glass before another sip. What would he do without this smart ass?]
Sure not the same as you.
[Clink of glass before another sip. What would he do without this smart ass?]
Sure not the same as you.
Like a 1950 Buick Roadmaster Convertible?
[Do you like the sound of that, Lawrence Dimick? Those words coming out of this smart ass mouth? Except he's not being such a smart ass about the car, it's a fucking classic.]
[Do you like the sound of that, Lawrence Dimick? Those words coming out of this smart ass mouth? Except he's not being such a smart ass about the car, it's a fucking classic.]
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