Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) (![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
Entry tags:
log post II
third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
Makes for fucking perfect. [Now it's his turn to tilt his head this way and that to give his mouth free reign. Mr. Orange was fucking his hand thinking of him before the heist. Larry had his green eyed hooker, and here we are. Still blows his mind.]
License or no license. You know what you're doing.
[Fuck if he could go hard again sooner... ]
You still got one more gun to go.
[Larry's shirt can do the cleaning. Their apartment is always warm enough to be comfortable in various states of undress.]
License or no license. You know what you're doing.
[Fuck if he could go hard again sooner... ]
You still got one more gun to go.
[Larry's shirt can do the cleaning. Their apartment is always warm enough to be comfortable in various states of undress.]
I told you I learn quick.
[Oh yeah and fuck his own hand desperately he did to the very thought of Mr. White...among others, but mostly Mr. White and nowadays only Lawrence Dimick. They've come pretty far to land in this nice home with nice ladies hanging on the wall like their dicks are hanging out while there are handguns on the table. Next to a bucket of chicken. It's almost criminal.]
Right back to business huh? Alright alright.
[That's right the least Larry can do is loan him that shirt. Wiping up doesn't take much but Freddy grabs a couple tissues just to make sure the job gets done. He tosses the wad into the nearest can from his seat. Slamdunk. That he starts working on the second gun with his pants still undone is just for Larry's benefit, he's the only one who gets them.]
[Oh yeah and fuck his own hand desperately he did to the very thought of Mr. White...among others, but mostly Mr. White and nowadays only Lawrence Dimick. They've come pretty far to land in this nice home with nice ladies hanging on the wall like their dicks are hanging out while there are handguns on the table. Next to a bucket of chicken. It's almost criminal.]
Right back to business huh? Alright alright.
[That's right the least Larry can do is loan him that shirt. Wiping up doesn't take much but Freddy grabs a couple tissues just to make sure the job gets done. He tosses the wad into the nearest can from his seat. Slamdunk. That he starts working on the second gun with his pants still undone is just for Larry's benefit, he's the only one who gets them.]
[There's an opportunity to mention stopping on skates but it's not that good of a joke. Though in every other way, Larry knows that the kid is dead on. Fast at learning how to mimic a criminal, fast at becoming a pro at fucking... Not so kid like at all.]
Hey, no lip. I might have something nice for you for doin' that for me.
[Criminal life style? Maybe. Mr. White wouldn't want to live any other way if he had the choice. Cleaning gives him more opportunity to touch over his dick hanging out. Makes the whole gun cleaning process even more enjoyable than before.]
Hey, no lip. I might have something nice for you for doin' that for me.
[Criminal life style? Maybe. Mr. White wouldn't want to live any other way if he had the choice. Cleaning gives him more opportunity to touch over his dick hanging out. Makes the whole gun cleaning process even more enjoyable than before.]
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
synanthrope
2011-02-12 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
[Saya steps into the garage, bundled up, a little later than she usually is, bags and boxes in her hands. She looks like she just came from a shopping trip, and her cheeks are pinker than usual]
Hello? I know I'm late, are you here?
Hello? I know I'm late, are you here?
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
orangetoughguy
2011-02-12 12:13 am (UTC)(link)
[Fsssssttttsssssss. That's the sound of someone using some kind of machine to take the bolts off a wheel so he can remove the tire. He catches Saya's voice at the tail end of the process. Up goes a floppy haired head before Freddy gets to his feet.]
I'm here.
[Where the hell that scrawny kid is Freddy doesn't know.]
Need help? [Regardless of the answer he's already wiping his hands off in case she needs them.]
I'm here.
[Where the hell that scrawny kid is Freddy doesn't know.]
Need help? [Regardless of the answer he's already wiping his hands off in case she needs them.]
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
synanthrope
2011-02-12 12:16 am (UTC)(link)
[She sees Freddy come towards her and she offers him one of the bags, just so she's less loaded down and can take her coat off]
I went to order some new battery casings, and ran some errands on the way.
[Fashion-related errands]
I was hoping you could help me anyway, if you're not too busy.
I went to order some new battery casings, and ran some errands on the way.
[Fashion-related errands]
I was hoping you could help me anyway, if you're not too busy.
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
orangetoughguy
2011-02-12 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
Sure. I'm on wheel maintenance.
[That's all, he says like it's no thing cause to a grease monkey it really isn't. So Freddy takes one of those fancy looking bags. He's careful not to bump it (too much) against any of the stained surroundings.]
[That's all, he says like it's no thing cause to a grease monkey it really isn't. So Freddy takes one of those fancy looking bags. He's careful not to bump it (too much) against any of the stained surroundings.]
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
synanthrope
2011-02-12 12:20 am (UTC)(link)
[Once her coat is off and hung up, she shifts her weight quickly, her heels clicking on the cement of the Garage - it's just a habit that she has, before she takes one of the bags from Freddy and takes it over to a nearby worktable to set it down]
You know where the hospital is, yes? Do you know Doctor Robert Chase?
You know where the hospital is, yes? Do you know Doctor Robert Chase?
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
orangetoughguy
2011-02-12 12:22 am (UTC)(link)
[Okay this is already getting interesting.]
Yep. I know'im.
Yep. I know'im.
[Hey stopping on ice is a different story okay? Just leave it at that, fff.]
Like what a bucket of chicken?
[That's a quip for you, Lawrence Dimick. Click click, shtick. That gun is coming apart at the seams much like its owner did under their fists.]
Like what a bucket of chicken?
[That's a quip for you, Lawrence Dimick. Click click, shtick. That gun is coming apart at the seams much like its owner did under their fists.]
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
synanthrope
2011-02-12 12:24 am (UTC)(link)
[She takes a box out of the bag and sets it on the table]
I need you to deliver this to him for me. I would do it myself but I have paperwork to go through and I would like to get it done before the weekend.
I need you to deliver this to him for me. I would do it myself but I have paperwork to go through and I would like to get it done before the weekend.
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
orangetoughguy
2011-02-12 12:28 am (UTC)(link)
[. . . . . .]
Ain't this a little backward?
Ain't this a little backward?
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
synanthrope
2011-02-12 12:29 am (UTC)(link)
[She pauses to look at him and tilt her head]
What do you mean?
What do you mean?
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
orangetoughguy
2011-02-12 12:33 am (UTC)(link)
You givin' him nice crap.
[When you already take the guy out for joyrides in the sports car. You try seducing Larry but you don't make a single pass at me. You know, that kind of stuff. Surely by now Saya can appreciate Freddy's candidness?]
[When you already take the guy out for joyrides in the sports car. You try seducing Larry but you don't make a single pass at me. You know, that kind of stuff. Surely by now Saya can appreciate Freddy's candidness?]
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
synanthrope
2011-02-12 12:35 am (UTC)(link)
[She can and she does]
Are you saying he should be giving me nice things?
Are you saying he should be giving me nice things?
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
orangetoughguy
2011-02-12 12:37 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah? On a doctor's salary? Come on.
[At least that's how it works in his world.]
[At least that's how it works in his world.]
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
synanthrope
2011-02-12 12:38 am (UTC)(link)
He can give me nice things, if he chooses to. He chooses not to, just like he chooses not to sleep with me.
[This is said matter-of-factly, not any other way. Oh Saya.]
[This is said matter-of-factly, not any other way. Oh Saya.]
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
orangetoughguy
2011-02-12 12:47 am (UTC)(link)
Oh. [Oh] Okay. I'll drop it off.
[Weird....] You want me to give him a message or somethin'?
[Weird....] You want me to give him a message or somethin'?
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
synanthrope
2011-02-12 12:49 am (UTC)(link)
Tell him that if the size five doesn't fit his girlfriend properly, he should send them back and I'll change them for a better fit.
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
orangetoughguy
2011-02-12 12:54 am (UTC)(link)
Wait wait wait.
[No see cause now he has to ask.] You're gettin' him his gifts for his girlfriend?
[No see cause now he has to ask.] You're gettin' him his gifts for his girlfriend?
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
synanthrope
2011-02-12 04:58 am (UTC)(link)
It's like getting a man a gift of lingerie.
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
orangetoughguy
2011-02-12 05:02 am (UTC)(link)
So...you're gettin'im a present for'im cause he wants to see his girl in'em?
[Oh God now he has to peek but Freddy won't do it yet, not unless Saya clearly grants him permission...in the office anyway.]
[Oh God now he has to peek but Freddy won't do it yet, not unless Saya clearly grants him permission...in the office anyway.]
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
synanthrope
2011-02-12 05:03 am (UTC)(link)
[She nods, which is almost unusual for her, she's not that demonstrative]
I'm told she's quite young. I don't think she knows how to pick out shoes that a man like Robert would find attractive.
I'm told she's quite young. I don't think she knows how to pick out shoes that a man like Robert would find attractive.
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
orangetoughguy
2011-02-12 05:09 am (UTC)(link)
[Does this count as watercooler gossip??]
Whoa what? How young?
Whoa what? How young?
How would I know, why should I care, please don't bother tryin' to find her;
synanthrope
2011-02-12 05:10 am (UTC)(link)
[Maybe?]
Significantly younger than me.
[Pause]
Young enough that I would consider her a girl.
Significantly younger than me.
[Pause]
Young enough that I would consider her a girl.
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