Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) (
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orangetoughguy
2011-03-06 09:17 am (UTC)
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[What? What? He wakes up a little too suddenly like for Freddy the moment of shutting his eyes didn't last as long as it did.]
No keep it--keep it for yourself, man. No canteen's gonna
[Swallow.]
save me.
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whitetwoguns
2011-03-06 09:22 am (UTC)
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Come on. Just a bit.
[He's already pulling it out and stepping over his own seat to be near where the kid lays.]
Wet your lips.
[If there was more water he'd be cleaning the man's forehead with his handkerchief. For now he'll dab the sweat there.]
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orangetoughguy
2011-03-06 09:37 am (UTC)
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[A little frustration creeps in for Larry's insistence. Why is he being so kind? Doesn't he know what Freddy is? Regardless, he does lick his lips, but it's more than just for wetting them. It's his anxiety.]
Keep it for yourself, Larry.
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No keep it--keep it for yourself, man. No canteen's gonna [Swallow.] save me.
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Wet your lips. [If there was more water he'd be cleaning the man's forehead with his handkerchief. For now he'll dab the sweat there.]
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Keep it for yourself, Larry.