orangetoughguy: (grease is the word)
Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) ([personal profile] orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
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log post II


third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
whitetwoguns: (On the tip of your tongue)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-03-21 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
[He is but he isn't. The hard knock life of Lawrence Dimick. Blowing his load too soon and then it may be over before it's begun. There's no way in he'll he'd endure that.]

Mmmphmm.

[Cheeks hollowed, Larry keeps on moving with those hips. His free hand goes to the kid's balls, better Freddy than himself. Fuck he is so hard right now. Blame the dick in between his lips and the other three on the TV.]
whitetwoguns: (Satisfied Mind)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-03-21 10:10 pm (UTC)(link)
[Larry can't see the other fucks anyway from where he is. And even if he could, why look at them when he can watch him twitch and move. Off? Already. He slides up and off, letting saliva go with him.]

Thought you'd never say so.

[Shirt up and off. Briefs after. Feels good to be free of any constriction. Larry bends over, arms braced on the arm rest of the couch.]
whitetwoguns: (Ain't no joy ride)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-03-21 10:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Are you really going to tell me what I can and can't do? [Oof! For that smack to the ass. Larry waits. It's torture not to touch himself and it's idiocy not to pay attention to the next scene playing out.

With Freddy back he's mildly distracted. The tape is not much of a surprise except when he tucks it between his legs it's a fucking shock. In a flash he's looking between his legs to see what those animated hands are doing exactly. Oh. ...If it'll do what it'll do...he wants to last longer.]


Yeah. I'm okay, buddy boy.

[Swallow.]

See this in any of your flicks?
whitetwoguns: (Dream Weaver)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-03-21 10:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Regular fucking comedian you are.

[He laughs before it's smothered by a groan for the touch. The tape is snug, but nothing feels like it's gonna turn blue then fall off. And Freddy should know for certain that the fun is all over if the old man loses his cock.]

Got any more surprises?

[Outside of the norm. He hisses at the touch of those fingers and leans back some to meet them.]
whitetwoguns: (Like a Gentleman)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-03-21 11:07 pm (UTC)(link)
[Already it's more than what he could have asked for after all is said and done. The hatchet is buried.]

Oh, fuck.

[The smack then the way his lips are moving on his skin has got Larry almost covered in goosebumps.]

Fuck me, Freddy. Fucking pound me. I want it so bad.

[Words supplemented with him trying to move on those fingers.]
whitetwoguns: (Charles Bronson in the Great Escape)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-03-21 11:22 pm (UTC)(link)
[A groan for the absence of those fingers. Any second now will be the real deal. Larry's got it bad for this fucking kid. All the confusion and bullshit and occupations come with being a fool for love.]

Oh baby. Oh shit. [That's what you call good, each inch gained is one well appreciated. Stretching to fit this cool piece of Newendyke is something Larry decides to do audibly. What the hell does he have to loose? On top of that, hell, the kid loves it.]
whitetwoguns: (Default)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-03-22 12:15 am (UTC)(link)
[That smack has got him holding the kid like his life depends on it.]

God.

[First series of slams and he's competing with Diego...Jerome...whoever the fuck is the loudmouth of the operation. The old man sounds like he's trying for the Metropolitan Opera.]

Yesss.
whitetwoguns: (Are you a doctor?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-03-22 12:40 am (UTC)(link)
[Why stay fixated on the fantasy of film when you're living out the real deal. Larry rides with him, slam for slam as much as he can manage between the haze of pleasure he's swimming and squirming.]

I love [get it out, old man, let him hear it after all he means it] you. [He hisses at the scratch and arcs up against him as he claws downward.] Mark me up.

[So damn good, oh shit. He looks back at the monster that's got him so wound up.]

Do it. Fill me up.
whitetwoguns: (Madonna songs)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-03-22 01:01 am (UTC)(link)
[Freddy would have to be quick on the draw if that therapist piece of shit with his too long hair and scarves is going to pull something, Larry would get him like Clint in a Western.]

Please. Fuck. Freddy.

[So much pressure, so damn close but so fucking far. And the hot rush of semen along with the thrusts to his prostate the old man is shaking.]

That feels so good, baby.
whitetwoguns: (Dream Weaver)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-03-22 06:12 am (UTC)(link)
[This would be worth talking about out loud. The old man may be sure of what he wants and his likes and dislikes but he's got his own bouts of doubt. Maybe its because he knows for sure this hippie of a motherfucker is educated, crime free--two things he cannot boast. At least he ain't no spring chicken.

Freddy's weight on him, keeps him in the moment. He pants and swallows, working to try and answer.]


Wound up as hell.

[The touch to his dick has him shivering. There's something on the TV?]
whitetwoguns: (Ain't no joy ride)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-03-22 06:29 am (UTC)(link)
[Anyone who likes Freddy though has good taste. Who wouldn't? He's smart, comic book cultured unlike any other. And come on, he may not be a typical handsome face he is still fucking attractive. In Larry's head, who wouldn't want to be up on that?]

Yes.

[Larry turns his head to have a taste of the kid.]

Recovered already?

[An easy grind, half a tease and to marvel at how great they fit.]
whitetwoguns: (Anyway the wind blows)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-03-22 06:43 am (UTC)(link)
[Make that two hisses. Is that how a glove feels?]

Not yet.

[He repeats it, trying to process it. Inhale, exhale.]

Careful now.

[Removing that tape. It's a nifty tactic. Larry's seen it maybe once before now that he thinks about it. But he had never done it before. Oh, the film keeps on a-rollin'.]

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