log post II

[orangetoughguy]

third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
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Comments

[whitetwoguns]

Sounds like a man who's been around the block.

[Say, what kind of women has Freddy been involved with? He has wondered from time to time. Any that talk like that from a woman and all the time spells trouble.

Vroom, vroom says Christie Love. He gives Freddy's arm a pat.]

[orangetoughguy]

Enough to know which neighborhoods I oughta stick to.

[He replies over the sound of the engine. It's an offhand remark, something the kid thinks is a witty retort that just happens to be way close to the truth. Whether Freddy realizes it or not.]