orangetoughguy: (grease is the word)
Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) ([personal profile] orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
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log post II


third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
whitetwoguns: (Like a cucumber)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-20 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Freddy-! I'm not gonna be able to last if you--[Yes, everyone knows at this point if the copy says it out loud. His fingers curl into Freddy's hair.]

Suck it, kid. Give it to him good.

[Larry works his cock faster, harder in his hand rubbing the tip. His own is grinding and sliding for all he's worth. The copy is a good gauge for how much longer he'll last. Is this what Freddy had in mind when he wanted this? Because it isn't always so damn loving. Blame it on the third even in his simple way is absolutely adoring Newendyke.]
whitetwoguns: (Under Pressure)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-20 11:26 pm (UTC)(link)
[The original Mr. Dimick is keen to these motions. Even if he's calling the shots Freddy is the one in charge. No doubts or questions. He slows up as asked, fuck though its hard to so much his hips are shaking with strain. Plain to see why though, look at him savoring. The copy too. Oh man, he's throwing his head back and holding Freddy while he comes, shaking and moaning not bothering with anything obvious. When he's done he slowly pulls away, stroking the kids hair and touching his face.]

Thank you, that was wonderful.

[With a thick swallow from the original old man, he calls for the copy to get down and finish sucking Freddy off. No talking out of him. Besides, he's racing to the finish hoping to fling the kid first. The moment those non-smoking lips wrap around cock that's when he really falls back into the motion.]

Like that, tough guy? Huh? Gonna fucking fill you right on up.

[This is so much better than those flings he had all those years ago. He cares about the other parties and fuck, it's more heady. They're all noisy. Senses are running amok without drugs too. How about that.]
whitetwoguns: (Dream Weaver)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-20 11:44 pm (UTC)(link)
[There's that noise again from the bird. What is that even? It's distracting from the cries that Freddy's making. Oh man does the old man love those. The copy must too he figures, if not well, he can't say. He's too busy swallowing because that's what the kid did, in his head that's just what you do. It sure is hot and messy, bitter in his throat but he still swallows.]

Yeah, baby. Go on. Lose it in my mouth. I want it so-[woah man, Larry's seconds away from his end. He's going for it grinding his way through Freddy's orgasm until blowing his load all over his prostate.]

You're fucking beautiful.
whitetwoguns: (Tell you he wears ladies underwear)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-21 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
[The clone figures that must be what it tastes like, and he sucks until there's nothing left. Only then does he pull away panting. His paws rub the kid's stomach up to his chest watching it rise and fall quickly.]

Good, good shit, cowboy. [No more thrusting, only a slow grind to soak in the rest of the feeling.]

Holdin' on, okay? Ready for more?

[Teasing, Freddy. He's just fucking with you. Damn, right here in their living room in front of the bird. Oops. Larry leans over the kid to kiss at his back some.]
whitetwoguns: (On Guard)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-21 12:30 am (UTC)(link)
I feel very good, Freddy....except very tired. I don't know if I can move. [Clone bear is panting. His paws move to touch his hair half hold him to his body.] You feel great to me.

[Larry on the other hand is simmering himself.]

Think he should be okay tomorrow, don't want to wear the guy out. [Talking about the clone, like he himself isn't tuckered out by it.] I'm gonna start pullin' out, tough guy. You ready for it?
whitetwoguns: (Grindhouse film)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-21 12:46 am (UTC)(link)
Slow it is.

[Nice and easy. That ass is a cherry red, begging to be taken care of. Larry sighs out raggedly.]

Freddy, I love you.

[That's comin' out of the mouth of the clone. It makes the original Larry laugh a little.]
whitetwoguns: (On the tip of your tongue)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-21 02:00 am (UTC)(link)
[Woah. Really Freddy? Really? Larry rubs a hand over his face to pull away some of the sweat, maybe to also hide his expression. Does he really have to say that he loves himself? But the clone is different enough to be someone else, how can he love that? Looks like he's going to get an elbow in the gut.

In the meantime though the clone is sitting up, looking the kid in the face.]


Now I know for sure why Larry likes you so very much.

[Can he be more dopey? Can he?]
whitetwoguns: (What are you talking about?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-21 02:15 am (UTC)(link)
What's not to love?

[Says the old man at last. He can only take so much brutality to the gut.]

One big happy...whatever.

[With an "Okay, Freddy" delivered with the goofiest smile the copy is getting dressed again. Larry shells out the money and writes down what he wants and what he remembers that Freddy wants and gives it to their errand boy. Oh and he has to make it perfectly clear where the Italian place is...with a refresh of the rules. No names. No bull. Don't be followed.

Is this what it's like to be a parent? Sheesh. Worse yet he sometimes wonders if the copy is reflecting his worst traits when he was younger. Yeah, he believes he's that much of a dope back then.]
Edited 2011-04-21 02:20 (UTC)
whitetwoguns: (Brother's keeper)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-21 02:46 am (UTC)(link)
[Good, good meal. The original ol' bear is on the couch, lounging and having a smoke. While he's mellow he's not done for the night. The clone on the other hand, well, he's been dragging since dinner. A shower than sleep was what he asked for.]

He's sure been in there for sometime. Maybe he fell asleep.

[Puff, puff on a Chesterfield.]

Water's still running.

[This is said at you, Freddy. Though...is someone talking?]
whitetwoguns: (On Guard)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-21 02:52 am (UTC)(link)
[Smoke between his lips he readily stares back at the bird. Weird little thing. What's with the staring? Is he trying to make a point? Oh. Must be the double business right now. Yeah, that's it. Except he was staring quiiite a bit before.]

Freddy!

[That's heard much more clearly from the bathroom. Once the door opens the room is filled up with steam from the hot shower. The glass from the shower door is partly opened, a paw is holding on to it white knuckled.]
whitetwoguns: (Under Pressure)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-21 03:00 am (UTC)(link)
My legs are gone! [Right you are, in fact he doesn't have much of a torso from the looks of it, just arms that are trying to keep together though there's some sort of a goopy quality. His face isn't looking so good either, something like melting butter.] I don't know what's happening! I'm scared! Help!

[As for the other Larry, he is properly engaged in the staring contest. The rushing water hides the copy's cries which aren't as strong as they could be. Just...what is so interesting about the old guy to look at. If he were a person it'd be because they're the same species. Larry doesn't have any fruit or any bird toys.]
whitetwoguns: (Are you a doctor?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-21 03:15 am (UTC)(link)
Freddeggghhh.

[He's trying to hold onto him like he was to the sliding glass door of the shower except his paws aren't working like they did hours ago. Breathing is more like a bubbling motion.]

Mmm scaaarreddd.

[Once those eyes close, they can't open again.]

Whatsssh happenenugh?

[By this time Larry, the real unmelting Larry, comes into the bathroom. What the fuck could be making all of the noise? He comes on into the bathroom to see a fleshy mass of something falling apart in Freddy's hands.]

Jesus fucking Christ!
whitetwoguns: (Stop hey what's that sound?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-21 04:28 am (UTC)(link)
Fregh... scaregh...

[That's all the copy can say now. What was a mouth is about shut. As for limbs they're not there anymore. Larry stands blinking and about dropping his cigarette. What? Oh. Question.]

It's about 11:59... Fellas got a minute.

[And counting. Now it's only goop. No eyes, no ears or mouth or anything looking like a person at all. Just. Goop.]

Damn. Melted like the fucking witch from Oz.

[Hey look the bird can stare at something else.]

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