orangetoughguy: (grease is the word)
Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) ([personal profile] orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
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log post II


third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
whitetwoguns: (Stop hey what's that sound?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-24 08:43 am (UTC)(link)
Ain't you always?

[Fire is only the half of it. The old man is almost hurting to go from complete motion to circling his hips for a little relief.]

I see her.

[Bitch. Whore. Bad, bad timing.]

Might be here for goods. Some kind of a deal.

[Not yet. Except all he can think about his how perfect Freddy's body feels on the inside, how goddamn hard he is. This lady better be somethin'.]
whitetwoguns: (Are you a doctor?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-24 11:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Wait? What? [Sorry, kiddo. He's twisting to try and see. Ooh man, maybe that's not a good idea. It only reminds him they're not fucking each other's brains out.]

Description?

[Those green eyes are sharper than his for the details. May as well know that she had a friend over. Yeah. Friend. Like they are friends who fuck, who love the ever loving shit out of one another so much that they pull this kind of a deal.]

Oh shit. Fuck it.

[Or him really. Hands under his thighs to grip firmly better to piston in and out of him.]
whitetwoguns: (Say the goddman words)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-25 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
[Okay. Now he can vouch for this sight. Though he's more enthralled with Freddy. Mission, as far as he's fucking concerned, is accomplished.]

She likes em big.

[Huff, huff. Now the windows are really starting to fog up. Grunt.] Oh fuck. In the hallway? [Paw wraps right around the kid, moving as fast as they are.]

Don't think it could feel as fuckin' good as this.
whitetwoguns: (Under Pressure)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-25 05:15 am (UTC)(link)
[The job is over and done. No more, no fucking more of that. All of his energy is gonna go into pleasure that's been riding on the sidelines far too long.]

No fuckin' way. [Oh man. How long has the old man been leaking precum? He's only just noticed now really throwing his back and the rest of him on into it. When Freddy demands it, it's like someone's electrocuting his insides.]

There we go. [Growling, his paw keeps vigorously milking out every bit of come he can get. It's a payout for both of them.] Goddamn beautiful. [His voice is low and rough. The kid said fuck him so the old man is riding him right through his climax damn close to his. Sweat and that hot load is dampening his clothes. Larry doesn't care.]
whitetwoguns: (Bang bang (he shot me down))

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-25 05:47 am (UTC)(link)
[To be honest, if it wasn't for the noise he figured it would be both of them shaking. Larry kind of misses the INXS song with this in the air. Small detail. Sweet, soothing kind of a tune doesn't seem to match.]

Uh-uh huh. [He's got a whine too because he's desperate for this man and all those sounds and moves that he does. One thick swallow as he presses nearer as though he'll pass right into the kid's skin.] All I got's yours. [One and two and there we go. Another hot load in the car, this one is only an internal mess.]
whitetwoguns: (Rambling man)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-25 06:11 am (UTC)(link)
[Freddy won't writhe alone. Larry can't help it as he's flowing in the sensation. His mouth hangs open to breathe. He sure can kiss can't he? It takes his breath away in more ways than one. At first he can't speak to reply to those filthy, beautiful words so he nods and leans into the touch on his head.]

So much [pant pant] better. [Knock him up? Laughter rumbles out and it makes his gut shake. They aren't using any protection. At this rate, this often the kid is dead on. Okay, Dimick. See if you can laugh, kiss and breathe.]

I don't feel good without givin' what's owed to you. [A kiss could help wet Freddy's lips more.] Got so much in there, I woulda thought we'd succeed by now. Should we keep on trying?
whitetwoguns: (People Are Strange)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-25 06:48 am (UTC)(link)
[Mmmmm. Being stuck together cooling after a good lay and sucking face isn't a poor ending.]

I put in, don't I? [Dirty talk only breeds more dirty talk. At least something's breeding.] Bout the same as I wanna get on out of it. [Mr. White, hardened criminal is surprisingly a giver at heart. He keeps on giving to Mr. Orange.] ...You'll get your turn. [For support. For his turn to bend over.]

Sure is. One for the books. [Other things. Come on, it's the dirty talk that's got him.]

Job's all done, tough guy. I'm all yours. [Without distractions or sharing because of the job, or the bird, or some so called friend. Paws smooth down his chest and empty cock for a moment making it flat against Freddy's belly then to his thighs easing his legs down.]
Edited 2011-04-25 07:16 (UTC)
whitetwoguns: (Like a Gentleman)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-26 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
[That it is. For being a woman without any hair she's got a china doll face.] Here's a good place. [How can he not grind against him to emphasize. Yeah, he's spent but this has been incredible. Those hands touching his face seem to seal the calm.]

You're not a mess. In fact you look pretty fuckin' fine if I do say so myself.

[There's a bunch of proud in here. He rests his hands on the tops of his thighs now that they're not in the atmosphere anymore. Hands off the dick, he's got it. Though he'll gladly help out if it comes on back into action. For now though, he's gotta move on out. His breath hitches. Freddy was right, tight fucking fit. There we go. This doesn't mean that he has to vacate his lap.]

Tomorrow evening. I promised I'd get it detailed too. So you and me could take it out for lunch.

[If he wanted to. Hey, that's an outing out of the apartment...and the bird. Always a man with some kind of a plan. Face to face he kisses the kid's chin and the tip of his nose before going long, deep and slow on his mouth.]
whitetwoguns: (Hanging in the balance)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-26 02:49 am (UTC)(link)
Oh yeah. That's right. I about forgot.

[There's a light shove as though physical contact isn't wanted or needed before plunging back into his mouth.]

Mmm? ...you'd want to bring the bird along?

[Be cool, Dimick. Be cool. Freddy likes the bird. That's how it goes. There's time to recover.]
whitetwoguns: (Inappropriate Table Conversation)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-26 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
[There should be more sounds like that.]

Wouldn't he fly away or something? [Hate for you to lose him sounds like it would be over the top. Already he feels as though it's too much. Larry can't just let it go either.] I dunno. I like it with just us.

[Should be easy to take, right? Right? At least there's no third wheel to give lip in this situation like a certain former friend. Or something. Right?]
whitetwoguns: (Brother's keeper)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-26 03:30 am (UTC)(link)
[The mental picture of Freddy in public with the parrot on his shoulder should not be in the City. It should be on vacation on a beach on an island. How conspicuous is guy without a name with a parrot anyway? The texture of his lips on his jaw makes him feel guilty. Don't bullshit, Mr. White.]

I'm beginning to think that I'm not a bird person.

[Perfectly acceptable statement. He should ease into it. At least it isn't a shocking revelation about his identity.]
whitetwoguns: (Ain't no joy ride)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-26 04:16 am (UTC)(link)
[The old man looks back into his face. There shouldn't be too much to ask to talk it out mano y mano.]

Now, I don't hate the guy. He hasn't done me any wrong. [Let's put that out there right now.] I just don't like him as well as you do.

[Enough to want to see him all the time, every day. Hear those noises.]

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