orangetoughguy: (grease is the word)
Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) ([personal profile] orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
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log post II


third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
whitetwoguns: (Rambling man)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-25 06:11 am (UTC)(link)
[Freddy won't writhe alone. Larry can't help it as he's flowing in the sensation. His mouth hangs open to breathe. He sure can kiss can't he? It takes his breath away in more ways than one. At first he can't speak to reply to those filthy, beautiful words so he nods and leans into the touch on his head.]

So much [pant pant] better. [Knock him up? Laughter rumbles out and it makes his gut shake. They aren't using any protection. At this rate, this often the kid is dead on. Okay, Dimick. See if you can laugh, kiss and breathe.]

I don't feel good without givin' what's owed to you. [A kiss could help wet Freddy's lips more.] Got so much in there, I woulda thought we'd succeed by now. Should we keep on trying?
whitetwoguns: (People Are Strange)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-25 06:48 am (UTC)(link)
[Mmmmm. Being stuck together cooling after a good lay and sucking face isn't a poor ending.]

I put in, don't I? [Dirty talk only breeds more dirty talk. At least something's breeding.] Bout the same as I wanna get on out of it. [Mr. White, hardened criminal is surprisingly a giver at heart. He keeps on giving to Mr. Orange.] ...You'll get your turn. [For support. For his turn to bend over.]

Sure is. One for the books. [Other things. Come on, it's the dirty talk that's got him.]

Job's all done, tough guy. I'm all yours. [Without distractions or sharing because of the job, or the bird, or some so called friend. Paws smooth down his chest and empty cock for a moment making it flat against Freddy's belly then to his thighs easing his legs down.]
Edited 2011-04-25 07:16 (UTC)
whitetwoguns: (Like a Gentleman)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-26 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
[That it is. For being a woman without any hair she's got a china doll face.] Here's a good place. [How can he not grind against him to emphasize. Yeah, he's spent but this has been incredible. Those hands touching his face seem to seal the calm.]

You're not a mess. In fact you look pretty fuckin' fine if I do say so myself.

[There's a bunch of proud in here. He rests his hands on the tops of his thighs now that they're not in the atmosphere anymore. Hands off the dick, he's got it. Though he'll gladly help out if it comes on back into action. For now though, he's gotta move on out. His breath hitches. Freddy was right, tight fucking fit. There we go. This doesn't mean that he has to vacate his lap.]

Tomorrow evening. I promised I'd get it detailed too. So you and me could take it out for lunch.

[If he wanted to. Hey, that's an outing out of the apartment...and the bird. Always a man with some kind of a plan. Face to face he kisses the kid's chin and the tip of his nose before going long, deep and slow on his mouth.]
whitetwoguns: (Hanging in the balance)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-26 02:49 am (UTC)(link)
Oh yeah. That's right. I about forgot.

[There's a light shove as though physical contact isn't wanted or needed before plunging back into his mouth.]

Mmm? ...you'd want to bring the bird along?

[Be cool, Dimick. Be cool. Freddy likes the bird. That's how it goes. There's time to recover.]
whitetwoguns: (Inappropriate Table Conversation)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-26 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
[There should be more sounds like that.]

Wouldn't he fly away or something? [Hate for you to lose him sounds like it would be over the top. Already he feels as though it's too much. Larry can't just let it go either.] I dunno. I like it with just us.

[Should be easy to take, right? Right? At least there's no third wheel to give lip in this situation like a certain former friend. Or something. Right?]
whitetwoguns: (Brother's keeper)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-26 03:30 am (UTC)(link)
[The mental picture of Freddy in public with the parrot on his shoulder should not be in the City. It should be on vacation on a beach on an island. How conspicuous is guy without a name with a parrot anyway? The texture of his lips on his jaw makes him feel guilty. Don't bullshit, Mr. White.]

I'm beginning to think that I'm not a bird person.

[Perfectly acceptable statement. He should ease into it. At least it isn't a shocking revelation about his identity.]
whitetwoguns: (Ain't no joy ride)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-26 04:16 am (UTC)(link)
[The old man looks back into his face. There shouldn't be too much to ask to talk it out mano y mano.]

Now, I don't hate the guy. He hasn't done me any wrong. [Let's put that out there right now.] I just don't like him as well as you do.

[Enough to want to see him all the time, every day. Hear those noises.]
whitetwoguns: (Stop hey what's that sound?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-26 04:31 am (UTC)(link)
[It's the lingering heat in here that's making him sweat. Larry stretches away to roll down the opposite window a crack.]

Yeah? Like what? [Can't all be pin-ups and the crime... can it?]

Not the company car. It's not anyone's toilet. [Though a portable boudoir that's different. Bear paws rub at his knee. The bird can use their floor, their couch, their chairs, living room, bathroom, bedroom... Just not the car. Let there be some safe grounds.]
whitetwoguns: (Under Pressure)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-26 05:09 am (UTC)(link)
Not gonna lie, kid. I don't know what that is really other than it lights on up.

[Disappointment can start now at least with the arc reactor. No, he is not going ask the kid give up the bird or make it as big of a deal...which in turn may be making a deal. He can feel those eyes on him, taking note and looking for clues like a good cop would.]

I think it's dirty enough anyway.

[No one's feces. That's crossing the line. Like this conversation. Larry knows better than to shy away now that he's pulled into the gravitational pull.]

Somethin' about that bird. He's everywhere. All the time. He can't sit still, he can't fetch. And I dunno if you noticed but he gets pretty damn loud.

[Before they hit the air Dimick is convinced he cannot be angry with these words. No jealousy or accusations.]
whitetwoguns: (Inappropriate Table Conversation)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-26 05:31 am (UTC)(link)
Battery? [No, he's not gonna unnecessarily shift or stiffen. We're cool. Fuckin' super cool in here. Everything's fine. Hopefully. The radio is now playing some girl group covering Simon and Garfunkel.]

Roams everywhere. [Getting in everything. Larry spreads his hands. No singular event or one thing that demonizes the bird.]

No. Get it right. He likes being around you the most. You and me, we go in some other room and he tries to break some sound barrier. I go about my business in some other room, nothin'. Hardly a peep.

[An exaggeration for a generally vocal bird.]
whitetwoguns: (Madonna songs)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-26 05:58 am (UTC)(link)
[Okay. Show's over. This was the exact opposite of what it was supposed to go down after the great fucking. Larry takes a grip on Freddy's shoulder even as he's scooting aside.]

I didn't say anything of the sort. Keep your shirt on.

[Like it has been the whole time.]

You're his owner. He likes you best. [And the old man could do without him but he'll be damned if he's gonna say it out loud right now.

Paid for the cage? Yeah. Big deal. It's what the old man does.]
whitetwoguns: (On the tip of your tongue)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-04-26 06:37 am (UTC)(link)
[They should ban the words don't get mad from all future conversations. All of them. That spearmint of a cool look that clear takes the old man by surprise. He knew Freddy was hung up on Sam, just goes to show how much. Chances are he was a hero to that bird. Fresh fruit is expensive. The same goes for the cage, for a person who can't pay for a car it wouldn't end well at all.]

I think he knows that or something. He really took to liking you from the beginning. [Larry knows the feeling. This as to be a salvageable night.]

...I can't go to work with you. [Sigh. He goes for a Chesterfield.] Other than that, I guess not know. Not really.

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