orangetoughguy: (grease is the word)
Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) ([personal profile] orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
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log post II


third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
whitetwoguns: (Grindhouse film)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-02 06:11 am (UTC)(link)
[Any passerby would believe from the sound that the old man is stretching. Not exactly.]

You sure?

[Freddy's find is getting harder in his hand. Oh fuck. The car in front of them is moving.]

Fuck. What's your order big shot?

[Maybe it'll move faster from here.]
whitetwoguns: (Stop hey what's that sound?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-02 06:27 am (UTC)(link)
[The old bear groans softly and shuts his eyes a moment. The grip on his steering wheel tightens.]

Okay.

[His arm goes behind Freddy's back since he's leaning over. Give the guy a little room. Fizzling and crackling come from the speaker. No voice yet.]

Depends on what kind of meat you want.

[Larry laughs at his own joke breathlessly.]

I'm going with a burger myself.
whitetwoguns: (Whadda you mean you don't tip?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-02 06:50 am (UTC)(link)
No.

[It's rushed out. That's what keeps it steady. He'll have to order some damn time. Is he out of the way or still leaning? The paw at Freddy's back rubs with fingers, trying not to get too handsy. It's public but not.

Now is the ultimate test. There's a voice on the line that wants to know what their order is. What the fuck is with time passing faster when he's in the hot seat?]


Hi. Yeah. [Swallow, breathe man. He's got food to order. And the minimum wage fast food slave doesn't want to hear an old man breathe heavy.] Can I get two shakes. Vanilla. Chocolate.

[Clipped, all of it. From the burger with fries to the heart attack sandwich. Larry feels like he's got some kind of a stutter to overcome. Maybe that'll be what the other chump is thinking. In reality, even though the old man can't see he can feel his hard cock being worked by one of Freddy's flappy hands.]
whitetwoguns: (Crash and Burn)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-02 07:11 am (UTC)(link)
[His mouth is slightly open as though he's waiting for the right moment to say something. There aren't any words though. The faster pace makes him completely tense almost bend over the steering wheel.]

Oh fuck. [Kung fu grip. Larry turns his head away from the speaker and the camera to look at the man. He slowly licks his lips. Oh wait. He listens to whatever is muffled back and shouts over his shoulder.]

Great. Sounds great.
whitetwoguns: (White album)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-02 07:24 am (UTC)(link)
[The window is at least two cars away. Larry and Freddy are stuck at the speaker. He has to keep his face turned away. Right now his brow is furrowed, mouth open like a caught fish. That's what he is, a piece of meat wriggling on the line.]

Uh huh. You got strong working hands, baby. I sometimes forget my dick can fit pretty well in other places.
whitetwoguns: (On the tip of your tongue)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-02 07:39 am (UTC)(link)
I wouldn't get to [pant pant pant] talk.

[At or with. Larry is trying not to roll his hips with the movement of his hand.]

Fuck. That how you touch yourself, huh?
whitetwoguns: (Like a Gentleman)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-02 08:01 am (UTC)(link)
[The window is up now. Though hopefully the speaker isn't that powerful.]

I've seen a time or two. Feeling it though...with nothin' else... [No kissing. No touching on Freddy. Who says he can't? Driving, even though they're not going anywhere quickly means he still has to use at least one of his hands.

Woah. Wait. Speaking of which. They have to roll forward a little.]


Get more lube in your hand. Work the tip like you're tryin' to screw something on.

[No pun intended. He puts up a pretty good effort of appearing calm putting the car into gear. Strike that. It is more like acceptably anxious. And then park. Finally. And out of the camera's shot.]

The rest of it, well, work the base like you're cocking a rifle. Keep it smooth, baby.
whitetwoguns: (Inappropriate Table Conversation)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-02 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
[At this point for how long they've been waiting how are people not expected to fuck around?]

That's the way. [Larry's moving a little with it. Could be that a guy is getting comfortable in the car. Switching up a seating arrangement. He drops a paw to one of Freddy's forearms.]

Yeah. Oh fuck. Two seconds, babe.

[Lawrence Dimick is not and never will be a teenage girl or even a teenager again but the kid has that kind of an effect on him.]
whitetwoguns: (Stop hey what's that sound?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-03 05:31 am (UTC)(link)
[Grip tightens on his forearm. Larry can feel the muscles and tendons move together in that arm. Hairs brush over his fingertips when he shifts his grip. It's definitely the arm of a man. This fucking Freddy Newendyke. Here is paradise.]

Jesus fucking Christ.

[That gun goes off. Hard and fast. The old man wants to lean over and get is mouth all over that man like his load is all over his fingers. Guess that'll do for now.]

Yeah, big man.
whitetwoguns: (Are you a doctor?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-03 05:45 am (UTC)(link)
Uh huh.

[Larry swallows so that he doesn't drool all over like a dog. He stops trying to fuck the kid's ands because he's doing a good enough job. Each and every time it's like he is draining the well dry. Like. And there's more than a little mastery in it.]

You got every fucking bit.

[Man. Now he feels like he'd go for a smoke. And food. One of those is still in the process though.]
whitetwoguns: (Ain't no joy ride)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-03 06:03 am (UTC)(link)
[He's going to ask what he meant by turn but the hand says it all. No questions asked, he takes a good long lick. Brown eyes on green eyes as he takes one finger into his mouth slowly.]

Mmm.
whitetwoguns: (Wasting time)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-03 06:20 am (UTC)(link)
[That is kind of the point. The kid earned a payoff. Sure can't be right now. Not the way the old man wants to deliver it. Tongue pinched he lets it slip and writhe. And he'll push to touch between those two fingers. Is there a third dirty one?]

So. What if I am.

[Might not be distinct because of those fingers in his mouth.]

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