orangetoughguy: (grease is the word)
Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) ([personal profile] orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
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log post II


third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
whitetwoguns: (Under Pressure)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-08-03 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh shit. [The physical response is almost automatic. All that visual stimulation and tension, playing the cool guy and not getting wound up....]

C'mon now, baby. Not much to talk about.

[Again he licks his lips and wonders if he's gonna be allowed to lay hands on the kid.]

Just...rubbing up on me and [the um is a groan] really working his whole body into the motion. He kept lookin' at me.

[Like he knew something.]
whitetwoguns: (Mr. Fucking Compassion)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-08-03 11:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm sorry.

[And he means it. Desperate little pants are pushing upward, maybe brushing Freddy's face.]

It wasn't an easy decision.

[But he made it any way with zero conversation. Great job, Dimick.]

Muscled, flexible and moved somethin' like a snake. He was all tanned and had a big forehead.

[No hands? Not even to sit flat and chaste on his thighs?]

He shaved. [Everywhere the eye could see.]
whitetwoguns: (Like a Gentleman)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-08-04 12:17 am (UTC)(link)
Real sorry.

[And getting sorrier that this has to prolong. The kid is too good at dragging the old man along.

There's booze on his breath and cocktail food in his stomach. Larry's wondering if he should fork over his whole wallet. Maybe that'll be better.]


No. [Eyes on his back, on his ass.] That's for women. [The old man likes a hard body unless that hard body wants to be a woman.]

Younger, brown eyes. I couldn't hear too well the place was so loud. Maybe he had an accent. All he told me was to relax and that it's not so bad.
whitetwoguns: (Are you a doctor?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-08-04 12:24 am (UTC)(link)
[Please don't crush his balls. Please don't crush his balls. He tries to clear his throat and act like it's nothing. Larry's not that good of an actor when his vitals are threatened.]

A few years. Looked about twenty.

[Meaning he could have been eighteen or seventeen for all the old man knew...but Larry figured twenty had to be the number to be there.]
whitetwoguns: (Inappropriate Table Conversation)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-08-04 12:36 am (UTC)(link)
I know. It was weird. The must have lax hiring criteria. Or maybe he needed the job real bad.

[Blah blah blah, sweet Jesus he's so relieved. His paw rubs over his forehead, there's sweat there.]

Grab him, throw him over my shoulder then bring him on home to you.
whitetwoguns: (Crash and Burn)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-08-04 01:18 am (UTC)(link)
Real skinny.

[And small.]

I dunno about the rest.

[Because he didn't check. Hands off, like they should be. Larry's trying to keep still and behave. He could pick up Freddy if he wanted to. Now wouldn't be a good time. There's something lighting his eyes that way.]

I wanted to have him blow you while I fuck you...or maybe you'd fuck him and I'd fuck you. Either way sharing was on my mind. Wished you were there.

[And he's not saying that because the kid might want to hear it.]
whitetwoguns: (Stop hey what's that sound?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-08-04 01:37 am (UTC)(link)
[If it were the two of them... could the two of them ever go in a City like this? Even if it was a joint they don't go to, even if they don't leave their names? That's a lot of ifs.]

I sure was thinking about you.

[Thinking about how strange it was to be that stimulated and have to fight it after having an outlet for so long.]

Freddy--?

[He doesn't shake the tie away but he tilts his head a bit trying to see if the kid is mad mad before he can't see anything..]
whitetwoguns: (Like a cucumber)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-08-04 02:00 am (UTC)(link)
[That voice cuts through the dark and the gunfire.]

Okay.

[Up he goes, with his shirt undone. The stiff one in his pants is noticeable by now. That's all this fox faced kid's fault, even with that pissed off tone he's taken up.]

You want me to do somethin'?

[If he were walking then he could at least grope to find out where the man is.]
whitetwoguns: (Charles Bronson in the Great Escape)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-08-04 02:16 am (UTC)(link)
[The quiet buzzes in his ears. What'll happen next? He does think about what it would be like to be lift like this then burdened with the decision of whether or not to do something about it. A head turn one way and then another way. Nothing he can sense so far.

Ah. There's the smell of Marlboros.]


Don't.

[Larry sucks in a breath as his very neglected balls finally get attention.]

You wouldn't go an leave me like this, would you?

[Hips tilt right into that hand.]
whitetwoguns: (Hanging in the balance)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-08-04 02:54 am (UTC)(link)
Equal shares, wouldn't touch it without you.

[The old man is almost shaking at that touch. Hot damn.]

Just asked me if I came here alone. Said no.

[And that was the truth. No lies here, kiddo.]

You? There?

[Dazzling before other people's eyes?]

...would you want to?

[His voice is dropping low like a growl.]
whitetwoguns: (Stop hey what's that sound?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-08-04 03:15 am (UTC)(link)
You could just strut around. That'd get people's attention.

[For the types like Larry Dimick or That Dick.]

How could I not come and watch you? [Uh oh. This is getting tricky now. Larry moves slowly, the coffee table isn't far. Goddamn it's so quiet. Feels even later in the day now.]

Nobody's supposed to touch the dancers. You bet I would.

[In both circumstances....yes. Now the old man is nude. The room is colder and smaller seeming.]
whitetwoguns: (Cool Side of the Table)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-08-04 03:33 am (UTC)(link)
[When isn't the old man trying to get all over the kid? He can smell Freddy's skin. Would that touching thing count if he tried to crane his neck a little.

He moans at the feel of rough denim against his cock. It's always better with nothing between them.]


I try and play by the rules.

[Not enough to evade jails and tickets.]

Uh huh. Wouldn't even bother with names. We don't need his, he doesn't need ours. Think you'd look good.

[Like he's trying on something. Paws lift like they're going to touch on the kid but ghost.]
whitetwoguns: (Rambling man)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-08-04 03:50 am (UTC)(link)
[Gasp and another moan. The kid can really move it. Does he know that? The old man likes it when he dances because seems like no one else dances anymore. Like shits are too busy or cool.

Freddy can have the lead, he was the one who was left to dine on tacos on his own.]


Okay.

[Woah. Woah. He's caught on to what the kid wants. He goes down, nose bumping against Freddy's chest then naval. Paws gotta rest on his hips now for balance and so that he knows where he's gonna need to be.]

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