orangetoughguy: (grease is the word)
Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) ([personal profile] orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
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log post II


third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
whitetwoguns: (Grindhouse film)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 03:22 am (UTC)(link)
[Click clack of dress shoes coming up behind you, Freddy.]

There you are.

[That's not affectionate. Though the voice is distinct.]
whitetwoguns: (Don't work with psychos)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 03:26 am (UTC)(link)
[The weight of a paw claps down on his shoulder. Hard.]

Are you ready to go?

[Go but not in the way that Freddy is thinking that is for sure. "Larry" is pulling the man right around.]
whitetwoguns: (Inappropriate Table Conversation)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 03:33 am (UTC)(link)
[His paw doesn't let up one little bit, in fact he is using it like a clamp and is hauling him away from the tea.]

I've been the same. You're the one who's changed.

["Larry" is trying to drag him out the door.]
whitetwoguns: (Rambling man)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
Nothing for once. I'm fine and thinking clearly.

[And he is still bent on pulling him out of the store. Both arms on him now.]

I'm not gonna take no bullshit anymore. Hear me?

[Larry throws his weight into it now.]
whitetwoguns: (Goddamn you Joe)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 04:12 am (UTC)(link)
Get the fuck back here!

[Tally-ho! The chase is on! He may not be the fastest but Freddy doesn't have much of a head start. Rubber drapes slap aside as he clatters behind. Workers rustle here and there with shouts at them to leave. As if they weren't already. It's cold back there.]
whitetwoguns: (Are you a doctor?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 09:21 am (UTC)(link)
[The alley is sparsely lit. Only a large metal dumpster and smaller garbage cans here and there. No where to truly hide. The old bear is lumbering close behind. Coming up the alley is another figure that practically runs into Freddy.]

Shit is that you?

[Behold! Another old man except this one is in his Hawaiian shirted glory. There might be the gleam of blood coming from his hairline. Nothin' doing though. Freddy's the one running around already not feeling up to snuff.]

Who is it? You get a look at him?
whitetwoguns: (Say the goddman words)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 05:46 pm (UTC)(link)
What the flying fuck?

[That'd be a fancy dance move if it were a different time. Sure enough out of the employee's only door is Lawrence Dimick in a suit. There is no time at all to soak in the weirdness. The man in the suit slows and crosses his arms. He's huffing and puffing as a Larry would to try and catch his breath.]

So this guy is it in the end? Are you serious? [Still catching his breath he manages to spit this out.] No Alabama or not even a Bobby. This? [He gestures to Freddy.] The fuckin' rat.

[Is Freddy still holding onto the original? If he is he can feel him stiffen considerably.]
whitetwoguns: (Thug)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Same. [At least he had been when he was knocked for a loop. Hopefully Freddy can hear that. He tries to keep it as quiet and rushed as he can. After all, from the looks of it, it's him.]

Don't mess with me, you piece of shit. You had your time.

[He tries to off hand check his pockets. That's one gun. The other though is either under the car seat or in the coat of the other Dimick. Fuck.

The clone straightens up. He's breathing easier now and is exuding that professional demeanor to a T.]


After fucking everything. Take care of that, [there he goes again gesturing to Freddy], take care of Pink, take the diamonds and get the fuck out of here. That's the only shit you can count on. You don't need em. Not Joe or Eddie.

[Not only is he spouting bullshit but he knows too much.]
whitetwoguns: (Goddamn you Joe)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 06:29 pm (UTC)(link)
[In a snap Two Guns draws his gun. Except the clone is very much the mirrored image of Larry. He is the one who has the missing arm of the set. One gun against the other in the alley way. It makes Larry's stomach turn to be in a three way Mexican stand off again. He knows they need to get out. And fast. The super market folks mighta called security or the police. Who the hell can tell what does and does not constitute the cops.]

Shut up. You dunno a goddamn thing.

[The safety clicks off in surround sound, the acoustics here make it even more ominous.]
whitetwoguns: (Making a getaway)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 07:01 pm (UTC)(link)
[The plan so far is that both Mr. White and Mr. Orange (the original editions) need to get the fuck out of this alley way and get the fuck home. How well, looks like the other Lawrence Dimick with all the fucks he doesn't give need to die.]

We're gettin' out of here.

[Brown eyes dart this way and that way. He shifts his weight, hardly taking a step. The clone catches though.]

That how you're gonna go down? Suicide by cop?

[Larry sneers at this accusation. God does he hate this motherfucker. He whispers to Freddy as low as he can:] on the count of three, we make a break for it. One. Two... Th--

[BANG. BA-BANG! The old bear backs up and shoves at Freddy.]
whitetwoguns: (Default)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 07:20 pm (UTC)(link)
[Consider his ballsiness as well as specifics to be another nail in the coffin. Larry doesn't care how he goes down he is just going to. The double fires second buying enough time for Larry to scrape by and avoid a direct hit or nasty gash. Two Guns is on target getting the clone in the chest.]

Stay down.

[There he is, falling backward and coughing. The clones blood looks unnatural in the yellowed lighting of the alley way. Looks like he'll be as good as dead.]

Come on.

[Mr. White is still in action. They gotta get running. Freddy's still not up to snuff.]
whitetwoguns: (Rambling man)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 07:31 pm (UTC)(link)
[It shouldn't feel weird. By the same logic Larry shouldn't be in a situation where he had to kill himself. Except clearly this was not himself.]

Come on, tough guy.

[The longer the stay, the more weird it will feel. Is this considered payback to Joe? Fuck he shot himself. What if this mean he dies? Larry doesn't say anything out loud but feels for a wound. There's nothing there. To the car, to the car, to the motherfucking car. He loops his arm around Freddy's back. Deja vu is enough to kill a man alone right now.]
whitetwoguns: (Are you a doctor?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 01:14 am (UTC)(link)
[He can hear the question. Right now Lawrence Dimick the original is all action. His mind is not processing as quick and keenly. Car unlocked, into the car. For a moment he considers putting Freddy in the back seat. No way. No way in hell. It's not the same. Instead he motions to ease the man through the driver's side door, whatever's easiest to get them away. Once he's in, Larry is hardly seated before he starts the engine. Door shut they drive.]

I'm okay.

[Nodding, his breath erratic only with the haste they've taken. The image in his head though of him laying in an alley. Fucking eerie. Here they are though.]

You?

[Eyes flick from the road to Freddy. No bloody? He squints a second. Something's trickling into his eyes. Might be sweat.]

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