orangetoughguy: (grease is the word)
Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) ([personal profile] orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
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log post II


third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
whitetwoguns: (Stop hey what's that sound?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 05:40 am (UTC)(link)
[That's more like it.]

Okay. You get any trouble on your end, honk the horn.

[Closer they go, practically blocking that way out of the alley. If Larry is in a bind, he'll head directly to the car. Maybe that'll occur to the kid on his own.]

I won't be gone long at all. Quick in, quick out.

[Just in case though, he'll take his own gun.]

Two minutes tops.

[Slowly he opens the door and leaves it ajar as he heads back into the alley.]
whitetwoguns: (Charles Bronson in the Great Escape)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 05:58 am (UTC)(link)
[Their company at the end of the alleyway complicates this in so many ways. One of them not letting the old man even blow a kiss in the dark.]

Not too bad so far.

[And he's off. Even though he said two minutes he is taking his time getting there. The people standing around they're backing off, unsure of what to make of it all.]

Anybody call a doctor or somethin'?

[That's to the shitheads there. Just another concerned citizen. Keep cool. Make it like you're comin' on over. Although seeing the man who looks like the man under the tarp gets far more hands off action. Hah. How about that.

Feeling pretty good, Larry kneels. Sticking out of the tarp is the hand holding the gun he's looking for.]
whitetwoguns: (Say the goddman words)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 06:13 am (UTC)(link)
[Like taking candy from a--as the old man is reaching for the gun, the other hand grabs a hold of his wrist. Through the thin tarp he can make out enough of that bloody mug. The relief of committing murder is replaced with more aggravation, can't the fucker die?]

Naugh so easy there.

[The thick muddy mouthed words are coming from the clone. Larry, holding the gun wrestles back. His hands are cold, not to mention wet with blood. Great.]

Fucking piece of shit.
whitetwoguns: (Are you a doctor?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 06:27 am (UTC)(link)
[BANG! Oh shit. The wrist pretty much is demolished. Larry ducks even though he knows Freddy won't be firing again. Making like a Kenyan Olympian down the alley, he hauls ass back to the car gun in hand. The bystanders have more to be fucking confused over.]

Get [pant] in [pant pant] the car. [Maybe he'll be able to hear him.]
Edited 2011-05-19 06:31 (UTC)
whitetwoguns: (Making a getaway)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 06:45 am (UTC)(link)
[Zero arguing. That's the beauty of the two of them in a time of crisis they end up syncing up. He slips into the passenger seat and begins to clean the gun...except from the looks of it, the splatter on his shirt isn't going to be worth cleaning anything.]

Go.

[This is Freddy's time to shine.]
whitetwoguns: (Stop hey what's that sound?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 06:59 am (UTC)(link)
[Man oh man. Larry feels like he's sweating like a pig. He rolls the window down. It quickly gets cooler in the car.]

Oh yeah. No doubt. That's a shit ton of lost blood. Think his hand about came off after I pulled it out of his grip.

[It's always more amusing in a movie because it's someone else. Right now he's still feeling pretty sick in side. No pain though. Even upon inspection of his wrist.]
whitetwoguns: (Hanging in the balance)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 07:08 am (UTC)(link)
[A nod comes before the verbal.]

Yeah.

[What's the difference between shooting himself or some cops, right? Though he feels shaken inside. It could have been a lot more worse. Both of them are breathing, not bleeding. They're okay. Mark this as another clean get away to their collection.]

We didn't get your tea.
whitetwoguns: (Grindhouse film)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 07:22 am (UTC)(link)
[Amen to a cigarette.]

Easy to brew.

[Less of a hassle. They've met their quota of hassles by far tonight. Damn they're making great time. Freddy can be a smoking driver.]

Great back up.

[Larry's unbuttoning his shirt to wear the wifebeater. His Hawaiian shirt is too bloody for the lobby. He rolls it up and tucks it under his arm.]
whitetwoguns: (Rambling man)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 07:34 am (UTC)(link)
[A paw touches on Freddy again. Nothing too intimate or intrusive. It's touching for the sake of being alive.]

Smoke?

[Larry knows there's something in the glove box. Chesterfields and Marlboro all around.]

...I'll clean this tomorrow.

[The car he means, his shirt will soak in the tub.]
whitetwoguns: (Brother's keeper)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 07:43 am (UTC)(link)
[Both cigarettes are lit between Larry's lips. When the Marlboro is properly lit he hands it over to Freddy. With the car off, silent and no longer idling around him. He notices the shakes.]

We're home free.

[...from a rattling experience all around.]
whitetwoguns: (Wasting time)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 08:13 am (UTC)(link)
[A deep, long drag. His longs feel like they're made of led or something. That doesn't stop him from trying to take in as much nicotine as possible.]

I don't know what to make of it all.

[He fucking shot and left himself dead in an alley. And the shit he was saying. Larry rubs a hand over his eyes he was going to rub the top of is head but remembers the blood. At least now he can look at it. He flips down one of the visors to look at what is there in the mirror. This is what happens when you get your head slammed against the roof of the car a few times after a hit in the head.

Maybe that's why he wants to throw up.]
whitetwoguns: (White album)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 08:40 am (UTC)(link)
[Sure the kid can get under his skin but Larry would never think to gun him down especially for the diamonds. The man doesn't even want them. And how could he think to put bullets in him with what they got?

Though it doesn't take long to recall that in a fit of rage Mr. White about kicked Freddy's ribcage in.]


Shit.

[This time it isn't a word flung out in frustration. It rolls out as a sigh, a reluctant acceptance. Flipping the visor back up he puts his hand on Freddy's. It all makes it feel like a sink hole is forming in his chest and all the bullshit is sucked in to keep falling forever in a state of being collected, not beginning or ending.]

I'd never say shit like that.

[What if someone would have heard? They'd be as good as dead.]

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