orangetoughguy: (grease is the word)
Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) ([personal profile] orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
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log post II


third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
whitetwoguns: (Are you a doctor?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 01:14 am (UTC)(link)
[He can hear the question. Right now Lawrence Dimick the original is all action. His mind is not processing as quick and keenly. Car unlocked, into the car. For a moment he considers putting Freddy in the back seat. No way. No way in hell. It's not the same. Instead he motions to ease the man through the driver's side door, whatever's easiest to get them away. Once he's in, Larry is hardly seated before he starts the engine. Door shut they drive.]

I'm okay.

[Nodding, his breath erratic only with the haste they've taken. The image in his head though of him laying in an alley. Fucking eerie. Here they are though.]

You?

[Eyes flick from the road to Freddy. No bloody? He squints a second. Something's trickling into his eyes. Might be sweat.]
whitetwoguns: (Brother's keeper)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 01:41 am (UTC)(link)
[Larry's not expecting the touch but he doesn't flinch. Calming down he's aware of the ache at his head. It must be bleeding. Stevie Nicks is singing through the radio:]

All your life you've never seen a woman taken by the wind. Would you stay if she promised you heaven? Will you ever win?

[One hand on the wheel, the other fumbles to perch on Freddy's knee.]

Your gut?
whitetwoguns: (Don't work with psychos)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 02:58 am (UTC)(link)
[Rubbing the knee now, not much at all. The kid should have took the dash first. Poor man. A run probably didn't help one little bit. Getting tea was supposed to be part of the remedy. Shit.]

Fuck.

[Larry's heart drops knowing that it is likely still in that motherfuckering clone's hand.]

Fucking shit.

[There could be prints. There's a body. He left it there like a fucking rookie. Keeping both of their skins was on his mind. Too late now.]
whitetwoguns: (Under Pressure)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 03:16 am (UTC)(link)
[Is he serious? Blame the adrenaline for making his gaze a few nasty degrees away a glare.]

Are you sure?

[Larry doesn't wait for an answer. Already his head is swimming with the prospect of the man hunt that will go on. He makes a u-turn as smooth as he can manage.]

We see lights then I'm goin'.

[At a decent pace. Speeding is a dead giveaway. Both hands on the wheel now.]
whitetwoguns: (Like a Heart Needs a Beat)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 03:29 am (UTC)(link)
If we leave I don't.

[Bad on account of being down one gun and have it connected to a murder, even if it is of himself. On the other account that's evidence for cases back in their world lost forever, that's good. But they're best in Larry's possession end of story.]

...I should go. You stay here.

[If they get caught, let the old man get caught. Besides, he could say it's a dispute with his brother...some shit. Whatever the case is, he can still see pain on Freddy's face.]
whitetwoguns: (White album)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 04:08 am (UTC)(link)
[Sure enough. They didn't get very far. Larry rolls slowly.]

Freddy.

[Larry tries to find the right words.]

Is that such a good idea?

[Who has the pain from an old wound? Maybe they're fussing over absolutely nothing. Maybe there aren't any cops. Slow now.]
whitetwoguns: (Mr. Fucking Compassion)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 04:29 am (UTC)(link)
[He listens but strongly disagrees. If Freddy is caught because he can't keep up or falls behind somehow, the old man would never forgive himself. Being in the car would give him the best chance at a get away.]

Rubberneckers.

[The old man slams a paw against the steering wheel in frustration. Around the back they go.]

Kid. [He swallows.] You coming?
whitetwoguns: (Stop hey what's that sound?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 05:40 am (UTC)(link)
[That's more like it.]

Okay. You get any trouble on your end, honk the horn.

[Closer they go, practically blocking that way out of the alley. If Larry is in a bind, he'll head directly to the car. Maybe that'll occur to the kid on his own.]

I won't be gone long at all. Quick in, quick out.

[Just in case though, he'll take his own gun.]

Two minutes tops.

[Slowly he opens the door and leaves it ajar as he heads back into the alley.]
whitetwoguns: (Charles Bronson in the Great Escape)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 05:58 am (UTC)(link)
[Their company at the end of the alleyway complicates this in so many ways. One of them not letting the old man even blow a kiss in the dark.]

Not too bad so far.

[And he's off. Even though he said two minutes he is taking his time getting there. The people standing around they're backing off, unsure of what to make of it all.]

Anybody call a doctor or somethin'?

[That's to the shitheads there. Just another concerned citizen. Keep cool. Make it like you're comin' on over. Although seeing the man who looks like the man under the tarp gets far more hands off action. Hah. How about that.

Feeling pretty good, Larry kneels. Sticking out of the tarp is the hand holding the gun he's looking for.]
whitetwoguns: (Say the goddman words)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 06:13 am (UTC)(link)
[Like taking candy from a--as the old man is reaching for the gun, the other hand grabs a hold of his wrist. Through the thin tarp he can make out enough of that bloody mug. The relief of committing murder is replaced with more aggravation, can't the fucker die?]

Naugh so easy there.

[The thick muddy mouthed words are coming from the clone. Larry, holding the gun wrestles back. His hands are cold, not to mention wet with blood. Great.]

Fucking piece of shit.
whitetwoguns: (Are you a doctor?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 06:27 am (UTC)(link)
[BANG! Oh shit. The wrist pretty much is demolished. Larry ducks even though he knows Freddy won't be firing again. Making like a Kenyan Olympian down the alley, he hauls ass back to the car gun in hand. The bystanders have more to be fucking confused over.]

Get [pant] in [pant pant] the car. [Maybe he'll be able to hear him.]
Edited 2011-05-19 06:31 (UTC)
whitetwoguns: (Making a getaway)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-19 06:45 am (UTC)(link)
[Zero arguing. That's the beauty of the two of them in a time of crisis they end up syncing up. He slips into the passenger seat and begins to clean the gun...except from the looks of it, the splatter on his shirt isn't going to be worth cleaning anything.]

Go.

[This is Freddy's time to shine.]

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