orangetoughguy: (grease is the word)
Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) ([personal profile] orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
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log post II


third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
whitetwoguns: (Rambling man)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-16 04:22 am (UTC)(link)
[When is he not? That kid always is. Always.]

Course. That's one of the things you gotta do here. Outside of gambling. [Which is a no brainer. Out on the street he grins. No more reason to hide since everyone's paying attention to other shit. Fuck does he love seeing Freddy in a suit.] The one's I got in mind might have to pound some ground.

[He slows up to take out a smoke.]
Edited 2011-07-16 04:28 (UTC)
whitetwoguns: (On the tip of your tongue)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-16 04:37 am (UTC)(link)
[The old man is right here to help. No worries at all. Watch, kid. He's gonna do this one for ya. And without a shred of scorn. Not many bastards wear cuff-links anymore.]

They got some with dancers and shit. Lots of neat things.

[The farther down the Strip, the dirtier. Say, is the Underground cursed? Now he's getting ideas. The night is young enough still.]

Trust me.
whitetwoguns: (Grindhouse film)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-16 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
[Earrings or cuff links, it's a display of comfort. What they got is comfortable. It's worth shaking things up now and then with an off the wall show. Larry swaggers out, laughing incredulously. It's been some fucking time since he had seen one. A man doesn't forget but witnessing it with someone else...]

You saw it with your own eyes, my man.

[Pat pat right on the back.]
whitetwoguns: (Brother's keeper)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-16 05:56 am (UTC)(link)
We saw what we saw. I'd rather not get hands on. That'd be the only way to tell though.

[Now he'll bump. It's what? Almost four am? It's safe to be touching on the kid here and now in the underground. It's what he's been dying to do all night. Why else would he take him to not one, not even two shoes but three with as much skin and content.]

Did you not like that one?
whitetwoguns: (Cool Side of the Table)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-16 06:41 am (UTC)(link)
You sure as hell can. Don't let anyone tell you they don't exist.

[The red light district is plenty active. People pass them on the sidewalk. The old man keeps his eyes peeled for pick pockets. If they walk closer together he can keep better track of both pockets.]

So. What did you like? I wanna know. Anything you'd try yourself?
whitetwoguns: (Stuck to her leg)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-16 06:57 am (UTC)(link)
Good because livestock is hard to get around here. That lady isn't gonna share.

[Laughing now, like it's nothing. No bites yet? Huh.]

That first part sounds okay. We could get sequence if you're hung up on it.
whitetwoguns: (Thug)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-16 07:16 am (UTC)(link)
I know for a fact that there's big cock in this town.

[Casual, cool. Dirty talk after a dirty show is particularly easy. That's the norm for them as it is. Still a sin though, huh so it's perfect for Sin City.

One way or the other he'll have fish tonight and eat like a king. Now he'll hold tight, and enjoy every tilt and sway of the boat.]


It can be arranged. We got diamonds, after all. Only if you can shake em while being drilled.
whitetwoguns: (Charles Bronson in the Great Escape)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-16 07:29 am (UTC)(link)
[The Underground to the Strip is a walk. It's tempting not to pull out all of the stops for a quick, hard fuck in the alley but they got the goddamn hotel room that is sure as hell not free.]

I'm right here, ain't I? That's one. You're here. That's two. And I think there's at least four or five accurate Elvis impersonators.

[We all know how the old man feels about those. Especially Freddy.]

Practice makes perfect. How about we lose the tassels entirely and get you fixed up with something flat. People do that these days. I guess at tattoo parlors.

[A sideways glance and the old man knows he's reeling in some of the line. Not too fast now.]
whitetwoguns: (Like a cucumber)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-16 07:47 am (UTC)(link)
[If memory serves the old man correctly there are mirrored doors to be utilized, big beds, the balcony...]

I haven't seen a Diamond Dave to give you. And I think you're jumping the gun right there if you believe that the four or five Elvises would get on you all at once.

[Arm around his shoulders like good, good (drunk) friends.]

Finding four or five would take quite an effort seeing as I left my tape measure at home. I'm happy knowing they're out there.

[Larry notices how his little piercing idea was 'ignored' privately he thinks that would be a perfect place to hide diamonds.]
whitetwoguns: (Dream Weaver)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-16 08:09 am (UTC)(link)
[The old man is feeling daring and stupid. He pats the kid's chest underneath his jacket to touch on him more. Wait a second. Huh. Two more pats to be sure then he's business as usual-ish. Let's not get out of hand so soon.]

Woah now. I know they'll want a bit of you. One look and they now you're a highroller exactly where it counts. Half the time a guy doesn't know whether or not they want to be the dealer or fold to you.

[Kinda like this fisherman who is trying not to drop the line and go in with both paws to grab this fish.]
whitetwoguns: (Ain't no joy ride)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-16 08:50 am (UTC)(link)
[One victory at a time. Feels like the kid might already have diamonds on him.]

Uh huh. That face. That nose. The'll be checking your feet too. Pants depending on what kid you wear.

[Larry doesn't slow but he looks long at this kid. Yeah, like the kind of looks he was just talking about. It's like watching a rainbow trout's scales shimmer under the surface of the water. He could reach out and touch the prize except it's never that simple.

The old man licks his lips like he's hungry and leans to whisper low enough so that only Freddy can hear:]


I'm going to drag you up stairs to the room and mount you on my dick. Just me and you and this city.
whitetwoguns: (Mr. Fucking Compassion)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-16 03:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Easy there. I thought you liked that shit. [Hands off for now to hold up as though utterly innocent.] You got it, chief. What else? Keep em' comin'.

[Commands, requests. Whatever will make him a willful, wriggling fish on the line. Don't snatch him up just yet. The Sahara is in sight. Thank fucking God.]

...do you wanna head start? I'm gonna get you one way or the other.

[Like that song by the only Blondie he wants to cross paths with.]

No, I don't want anyone swinging by and taking up what's mine. There are thieves around.
whitetwoguns: (White album)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-17 01:01 am (UTC)(link)
Easy for me. Hn.

[Both hands in his pockets he forces himself to slow. Breath and words tickling his ears beeline right to his groin. He even stops when Freddy says that. The old man looks to the left and right and then closes the distance between them to answer back.]

Real, real bad, baby. I wanna get all the fuck over you.

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