orangetoughguy: (grease is the word)
Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) ([personal profile] orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
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log post II


third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
whitetwoguns: (Satisfied Mind)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-18 08:28 am (UTC)(link)
Don't like flashing. Got it.

[What his words don't say those clawing hands sure do. Larry pretends he doesn't understand. He has to stoop some to get the lube and pretends to be distracted only a moment by the way Freddy's cock brushes against his thigh. No touching. Just looking before pulling up right.]

Missed one.

[Nipple that is. Yep, kid. The stakes are high and he wants a little begging. Hopefully the glass behind them is sturdy.]
whitetwoguns: (Like a Gentleman)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-18 08:39 am (UTC)(link)
Uh huh.

[Aw fuck it. The old man is growing tired of his own waiting game. Reel in the big fish. His mouth pulls off of Freddy's skin and almost pops.]

Turn around and look at your lights.

[Here, the old man will help too. Keeping his touch as sparse and effective as possible he aids the kid's turning. And then moves his feet apart.]

Beautiful.

[Both hands move over the curve of his ass before giving it a solid strike.]
whitetwoguns: (On Guard)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-18 09:05 am (UTC)(link)
[Everyone is a winner. That's how it goes. Larry doesn't dive in just yet. Can't let the kid take the victory lap so soon. Fingers are slick and cleaning this fish before the gutting.]

Oh, I will.

[First finger all the way until the knuckle. Enough to get him ready.]

Like all the neon? [Now the old man is lined up against him.]
whitetwoguns: (Anyway the wind blows)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-18 09:16 am (UTC)(link)
[Paws on the kid's hips to hold him steady as he slips on in steadily. Not too fast old man. The kid could take him gunning forward, there ought to be warning. Since he "won" he can wait it out until the joint is really shaking like all those clubs still are. Sunrise is two hours away or something.]

We could get a closer look on the balcony.

[Could. His voice is strained. It's been a long wait until now.]
whitetwoguns: (Tell you he wears ladies underwear)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-18 09:28 am (UTC)(link)
[Low groans from Freddy, growls from Larry. It isn't going to be a quiet fucking. Not when they've had to behave themselves so long.]

Right up your ass.

[Entirely sheathed he kisses above Freddy's collar.]

I know. We'll be careful, Mr. Stark. [He was going to go for Hal Jordan but it's been done before. Note to self: learn more of Freddy's hero's names. The old man's list is short.] I'm not gonna let you fall.

[The air on his skin will feel great. Not to mention there wouldn't be any glass fogging over.]
whitetwoguns: (Madonna songs)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-18 09:48 am (UTC)(link)
[Boy oh boy if he were to even breathe any of those cowboy analogies the old man's heart would about burst with pride and gratitude to even be compared.

How did he get so lucky and unlucking on that bad, bad day?

Larry reaches past to pull the door open.]


Lemme do the hard part.

[The walking. The kid can shuffle along. Both arms go around him. Woah. It's only a few steps but walking like this is not an easy task. Feels fucking straight. The balcony rail is within reach now.]

Much better.

[He sighs out in a huff.]

Now you can see fucking everything. [While fucking.]
whitetwoguns: (Mr. Fucking Compassion)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-18 10:05 am (UTC)(link)
Not like walkin' a dog on a leash. So don't expect it to happen all the time.

[And they can laugh about it. Feeling Freddy's chest rumble with it makes it contagious.]

Walking I mean.

[Both hands go up and down his sides.]

You're the star. The show starts now. [Larry makes sure his first slide forward is a steady, solid one.]
whitetwoguns: (Ain't no joy ride)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-18 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I would but [grunt] I think you need somethin' heavy duty in case you try and run wild.

[Roller paws take to scratching up and down. Lawrence Dimick doesn't have long painted nails so it doesn't hurt. Now and then though he strikes the kid's chest open palmed like he's trying to urge a mount to go faster.]

Fuck. [The smell of Marlboros and testosterone fill his nose on the inhale to puff against his skin on the exhale.]

You want my hand on you?
whitetwoguns: (Thug)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-19 02:51 am (UTC)(link)
Uh huh.

[Intelligent. Eloquent. And there's grunting too.

Seeing stars, seeing lights and the sweat that might be gathering on his skin. Traffic is still running on through the strip. It isn't as loud to the ol' bear's ears as their skin colliding. They're louder than he thought he'd be. Oh well.

Harder. Faster. Larry grinds roughly at the end of each fuck. The kid isn't a woman and the old man's not a donkey... it's still filthy and beautiful that way. Paws clutch at his thighs from the front.]


I'm gonna come right in your ass, cowboy.
whitetwoguns: (Brother's keeper)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-19 04:18 am (UTC)(link)
[Would people pay to see them like this? What a question. They aren't the standard movie star chumps. Freddy is attractive, he'd get takers if people knew the exact flavor of this orange. After all, the ladies look more than once. And fellas? Larry hasn't caught a motherfucker picking up on him yet but the very idea makes his pulse spike.]

Oh fuck.

[That dick that the kid is shouting for is leaking, as much as Larry wants to keep on going, he doesn't want them to be seen. He growls into Freddy's ear:] let go. Back up. [Goddamn he's held so tight and hot. Don't come like this. Don't fucking come while ducking out of sight.]

[They're going to have to repeat that walking trick.]
Edited 2011-07-19 04:18 (UTC)
whitetwoguns: (Inappropriate Table Conversation)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-19 04:53 am (UTC)(link)
Easy as I can. [Delicately as he can keeping all of the equipment in one piece. The evasion, protecting what is rightfully his of course enhances the experience.]

I don't think they'll wanna make it all the way down to our floor, we started without em. We'll finish that way.

[Breathe even under the touch of those flappy hands.]

...do [first slam back into motion] you wanna share? [He grinds and kisses Freddy's shoulder. Yep. Back to business. The upper balcony will have to just deal with the soundtrack of this show.]
whitetwoguns: (Satisfied Mind)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-07-19 05:22 am (UTC)(link)
Later. [Panting and gasping he laughs because it keeps becoming later and later and their own coupling keeps getting more and more exciting. How's that even work?]

You got me. [Hard and fast. The minute the kid asks for it, the old man's hand is right there.] God al-fucking-mightly you do. [Larry works his paw in double time. A handful of hard hits at Freddy and his prostate and he's blowing his load like he said he would. Noisily.]

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