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Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) ([personal profile] orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
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log post II


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log post I | log post II | log post III

[identity profile] meanstreetdog.livejournal.com 2011-04-11 09:39 am (UTC)(link)
[He licks his lips all the way around because he knows it feels good to be good and wet as he peels down Freddy's underwear. The fingers in his hair, the grip feels good and certain.]

Sounds good.

[First experimental lick at what he's seen what he's let himself think about. Tastes like skin and he lifts his eyes to look at Freddy as he moves from the tip to the top. Once and again. Baby he says and it makes his cheeks go red. Be a man, Dimick. And that cock goes between his lips.]

[identity profile] meanstreetdog.livejournal.com 2011-04-11 09:51 am (UTC)(link)
Mmmmm. [Deeper now to get a feel, how much can he fit? Larry goes for more and lets it slide because...that felt good. The verbal encouragement lets him try other angles, both of his hands go to Freddy's hips then slide down his thighs. He pulls away to breath because it's harder than it looks.]

Good?

[Tongue licks at the tip again then he's right back again, the part of Freddy's dick he can't fit--and he find it's like pushing a popsicle stick too far, he'll wrap his hand around.]

[identity profile] meanstreetdog.livejournal.com 2011-04-11 10:11 am (UTC)(link)
[Through the nose. Huff, huff. His eyes move from watching Freddy's hips to his face when he speaks to watching that cock disappear into his mouth. Woah, and when they're moving together.]

Nnnn.

[He moves carefully trying to take more in. Those hands on him and those words make him feel beautiful, like gold just as he says. Larry doesn't care anymore that he's red in the face. Should he keep going? Swallowing his own saliva feels very strange right now.]

[identity profile] meanstreetdog.livejournal.com 2011-04-11 10:27 am (UTC)(link)
[See though he would keep going because isn't it how it's done? Though if the man says lay off he does. Larry looks up at him and wipes any saliva off of the corner of his mouth. That's a lot more work than he thought it'd be. Regrets are not in sight yet.]

I wanna make you come, Freddy.

[Simple as that. Though he listens to him. It's a question he wasn't expecting to hear though a guy like Freddy he's real nice. That's probably why he's asking again. Larry pulls off his shirt and sets it aside on the couch.]

Yeah I want to fuck.

[The music is still rollin' too. Santana is drifting off and it's going to be replaced by the Rolling Stones.] Though... I wanna let you know that I haven't--I mean I've handled some other cock but I haven't fucked a man before.

[And thinking on this after the words are already out this could be unappealing. Big brown eyes blink and drift away with the realization. Good going. Well shit though, he's come this far. Keep going!]

I want to, believe me. I want to. Please.

[identity profile] meanstreetdog.livejournal.com 2011-04-11 05:48 pm (UTC)(link)
[As for Freddy, he's got long lean arms and a torso to match. No muscle man that looks like he's inflated flesh. Larry feels like a big brute, panting and ready to please.]

Okay. I'm not shy. [So he says. It's easy to say being naked on a stranger's couch. He looks up at that body, that cock wet with his saliva and in spite of himself smirks. Scooting as instructed he reaches out to touch Freddy and feel the sparse hair on his legs.]

[identity profile] meanstreetdog.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 04:35 am (UTC)(link)
Fuck.

[It's a desperate yelp. The man said dirty, Larry wasn't thinking gutter. Rubbing together he feels like a worm on a hook, shaking. He can smell Freddy's breath and sweat. All he knows is that he wants more. Larry won't be a scared piece of shit anymore. Rough, tough street guys do what they want, get what they want. That's how he wants to be. No more fear or cowering. He'll see for himself then decide if its right or wrong, based on this moment it's so damn right.

A paw rubs up from his stomach to Freddy's neck as he cranes his neck to try and get a kiss.]


I want it. Shit. Please. I want it. Fuck me.

[How can he be saying this? Aw fuck the pressure of fingers breaks his attempt at mirroring this cool calm fella Freddy. Brown eyes shut focusing on exactly how those slick digits make his whole body feel hot.]

Yes.

[identity profile] meanstreetdog.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 05:19 am (UTC)(link)
[No claws yet but he's clutching.]

I-I can [gasp] relax. [Pant, pant. His insides are slowly spreading at the touch of this stranger's hand.]

Ooooh.

[For the finger, for that mouth at his skin. Larry tilts his head away and back against the leather of the couch.]

Freddy--oh fuck. [Boyish red is in his cheeks. This would never happen with a woman, at least not that he can foresee. And he'd never feel this. Those animated, rough hands are touching him where no one ever has.]

[identity profile] meanstreetdog.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 05:40 am (UTC)(link)
I do. I [swallow] I love it. [Wheeze. Every normal function outside of shaking and shivering under his touch. The touch to his prostate is not one he was expecting. While the stretching and pressure, not to mention the suction of the mouth on his skin was getting him hot and bothered he jolts. His body tightens.]

Jesus Christ! [For a moment he thinks that he came right there, no. Not yet.] I-incredible.

[Larry's first time was when he was fifteen at a party. He and his date, a certain Vickie went into a den and locked the door. It did not last long but he was a quick rebound. At fifteen he was eager, clumsy and slobbery...and the one calling the shots in his way. Nothing like this.

Freddy said he's going to get him right there. He leans up and presses his mouth even while panting to kiss this man.]

[identity profile] meanstreetdog.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 06:00 am (UTC)(link)
[Can he take it? Right now Larry feels like he's balancing on an edge. There'll be a fall. Good thing he was never afraid of heights.

He laps his tongue against Freddy's, welcoming him into his body. At least he has more control over what happens in his mouth.]


I'm gonna be okay. [It's spilling out as a desperate whine. Oh man. He eyes that cock now looking super slick. It's gonna go right into him. Don't take his chest rising and falling quickly as a show of fear. The moment has stretched into eternity. Larry sucked his cock days ago, how he's aching for the whole thing.] I'm gonna be okay. Lay it on me, man.

[identity profile] meanstreetdog.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 06:25 am (UTC)(link)
Uh huh. [His brow furrows. Cock sure is thicker than two fingers. Both legs tighten on either side of his hips. This Larry Dimick is more limber and flexible, he doesn't have any back problems and his first time taking it up the ass isn't by force.]

S'really big, Freddy. [That there is a compliment. The way he's panting it could be a laugh, one of those given for a relief of tension. Calm down, he can calm down. Bit by bit, his body is taking in Freddy's cock. He's not even sure how, it's amazing to him too.]

[identity profile] meanstreetdog.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 07:21 am (UTC)(link)
[Wow. There were nights he spent thinking about men he had seen in movies or on the street only touching them as much as his imagination would allow. Jerking off in the locker room with his peers was about as good as he expected it to get. Was.]

I don't even know how you got so far in me. Oh my God.

[A bit more and that's it. Freddy is completely sheathed in Larry's seventeen year old cherry ass. He moves to kiss and pant at the man's neck, paws sticky with sweat still holding on.]

Yeah. I'm okay. [Swallow, pant pant.] Feel so full. [He speaks in a rough whisper.] You-you gotta fuck me, man. [If they stop now, Larry's certain he'd die.]

[identity profile] meanstreetdog.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 08:08 am (UTC)(link)
Feels like it. [Not that he's had a professional before. This assessment is going by how steady and sure he is. How he already knows what kind of moves to make.] You really know what's up.

[Moving even a little with those flappy hands makes Larry gasp. He huffs out a few breaths, easy. He can take this. Hot damn. A turn of the head and he's kissing at Freddy's arms.]

Fucking--fuck. [Larry chooses to grip at Freddy's torso, already clawing lightly as he moves. Each thrust he feels more bold, more tough and dirty. And importantly less ashamed of the sounds that are slowly filtering out.]

[identity profile] meanstreetdog.livejournal.com 2011-04-12 08:44 am (UTC)(link)
[Based on how good it feels, Freddy could have fucked a hundred men. Larry could be the hundred and first.]

Goddamn. [His eyes slide shut. The wrinkles on his forehead as he is swept into the feeling of those harder thrusts are the only wrinkles on his face. Even though he's under Freddy who's wrecking him like a storm Larry's trying to move with him now.]

Great! Freddy just.... fuck don't stop. [There's a full blown whine right there as he grinds deep. Brown eyes open and look up at him as he's begging with an open mouth even as the kid is stroking his cock. A few strokes and precum is rolling down the side. Paws grip at Freddy's hips. Claws are in use. ]

Fuck me.