orangetoughguy: (grease is the word)
Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) ([personal profile] orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
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log post II


third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
whitetwoguns: (Grindhouse film)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-10 06:19 am (UTC)(link)
[Music to the old man's ears.]

Fine.

[First thrust is solid and well placed. He's aiming for the prostate from the first go. With a head start he has to make the most of the time given.]

Can you handle the whole deal? Huh? I told you I'm not gonna hold back. I might consider goin' easy on you if you ask. Heh.

[His voice is strained. It's a more difficult act to hold up. Another hard smack before he really comes into motion. Oh fuck that is tight. Damn kid.]
whitetwoguns: (Under Pressure)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-10 06:52 am (UTC)(link)
[Enough with the hitting. Down to business now for sure.]

Pound the shit out of you. Just. Like. You. Like it. [Each clipped sentence is punctuated with a thrust.]

Fuck. [Larry lowers his head trying to stay focused. Pre-cum is slammed up against Freddy's prostate. Looks like his smug boast might be coming true after all.]

What my hand on you, tough guy? [One lean forward he can nose his ear.] You want that? Hnnnughh.

[He's trying to ask a question and not moan.]
whitetwoguns: (Are you a doctor?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-10 07:09 am (UTC)(link)
Okay, baby. Okay.

[So much for a seasoned gunrunning pro roughing up a newbie. Now it's the old man and the kid rutting like animals. Though it's never normal or dull. Not when they fall into action this fiercely, not when the kid sounds like that.]

Here.

[His fingers wrap around that hard, rod between his legs before he has the ability to breathe the word. Feels fucking terrific to work it. The fresh memory of Freddy doing it himself in his brain he mimics the moves. Though honestly, the man knows how to get the right result.

Speaking of. Larry's thrusts are getting more erratic. Fuck, he lost. Or won. Something. Anyway he's gonna let loose.]


I'm gonna come right on in that tight, tight ass of yours.
whitetwoguns: (Like a cucumber)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-10 07:28 am (UTC)(link)
[The nod is more of a nuzzle. He can make out the side of Freddy's face. Slam. Slam. This is one sturdy crate holding both of them up.]

Oh God.

[Hard forward thrust and grind mark Larry's orgasm. His hold on Freddy's cock and hip don't let up at all, they just cease to move as he unloads. If this were a warehouse standoff with cops armed to the teeth his cry would be one of despair. Quite the opposite. This fucking kid feels so good. Like this if he can strain to keep his vision straight he can see Freddy's expression. Double whammy.]
whitetwoguns: (Dream Weaver)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-10 07:43 am (UTC)(link)
Don't mean a thing. You're right behind.

[Even though he's in front and beneath. Huff, huff and puff. Back into motion. Freddy has got to come now. It'll make his relenting less of a point of bragging.]

Come on. Fucking burst.

[Grinding. Stroking. Even though Freddy's got a shirt on he still bites at his shoulder and upper arm.]

I wanna feel it, baby.
whitetwoguns: (Inappropriate Table Conversation)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-10 08:22 am (UTC)(link)
[Semen is hot on his fingers. Just to feel more of it he keeps his fist moving.]

That's the way. Good man. [Their low murmurs near his ear. Every stroke on his dick striving to milk out every drop like the size of the mess as a gauge of success.]

Fuckin' beautiful, that's what you are, baby.

[His baby. No one else's. This ass for all of it's frequent use doesn't get to service any other dick. A point of pride. Not to say that he'll never fuck anybody else but chances are it won't be like how Lawrence Dimick does it.

Nothing else left in him or Freddy he grinds and keeps stroking soaking in the mess. The smell of gunpowder and fucking. Good, good shit.]
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whitetwoguns: (Like a Gentleman)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-10 08:37 am (UTC)(link)
Face it. It's the best you ever had.

[Slowly he's easing upright even though it means surrendering that head massage.]

Probably the best you'll.

[Both hands are at Freddy's hips now. The one that has been clutching the whole time has the marks to show for it and the other is marked by some of the kid's load.]

Since I'm done with you I'll move. You got off this time.

[So did the old man in a big, big way. Pulling out will have to be a careful process.]
whitetwoguns: (Ain't no joy ride)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-10 09:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Good.

[A hair ruffle with the praise. A quick heavy handed pat before he decides to help a fella out by easing him upright. Before he sets himself straight Larry stoops to pull up Freddy's pants.]

Wanna take something home?

[Of their new stash. The old man knows exactly who is heading home with Freddy to their apartment (and bird). No brainer.]
whitetwoguns: (Whadda you mean you don't tip?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-11 05:13 am (UTC)(link)
[There's no small portion of pride noticing the changes to the kid's stance. Yeah, he does get the feeling it's always outdone or some shit. The delivery almost makes him believe it. Except for their ruffled hair, sweat and smell nothin' to see here.]

Sure.

[Now he'll take a load off on the crate putting himself completely in order with a comb.]

Does it gotta strap? Y'could strap it to your back and hold your coat over your shoulder. I got your back.
whitetwoguns: (Playin' With Fire)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-11 05:56 am (UTC)(link)
Got a problem with gorillas?

[Sorry. He's thinking of those big dicked monsters. Since he's taking a breather Larry lights up a Chesterfield and watches Freddy try and make it work.]

In this town who the fuck would stop or blame you? It could be a realistic toy.

[Shrug. Puff. It looks good on him.]
whitetwoguns: (On Guard)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-11 06:16 am (UTC)(link)
Maybe.

[He taps ash on the floor. Nothin' doing about that. The riches around them are the best part of the place. Nothing more to say for the rest.]

Not sure. Lemme see.

[There's another crate that wasn't assaulted. Larry jimmies it open.]

This here is more my speed.

[Small arms in here. Colts, Smith and Wessons.]

Decisions, decisions.
whitetwoguns: (Charles Bronson in the Great Escape)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-11 06:34 am (UTC)(link)
Fuck you.

[His cigarette flicks ash as he waves the hand in the air that's holding it at this implication.]

I gotta try a few for size.

[Watch this Freddy, the old man takes a Beretta and holds it with one hand and then the other. No he isn't gonna fire just see how it feels.]

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