orangetoughguy: (grease is the word)
Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) ([personal profile] orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
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log post II


third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
whitetwoguns: (Are you a doctor?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-21 10:52 pm (UTC)(link)
[Doing it and going to fucking town like it ain't no thing. Sure isn't a cock but the way it moves, slips and slides it has this ol' bear about shaking. He feels like a fucking trombone. It's so damn hard not to say yes because fact of the matter is it isn't the kid's cock. All that slips out is:]

Nnsssssss!

[Watch it. His hips will get into it if Freddy lets him. Forward to his palm, backward to his face in small increments.]
Edited 2011-06-21 22:55 (UTC)
whitetwoguns: (Take a fall take a shot)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-21 11:07 pm (UTC)(link)
[Damn right he's singing. Larry's grunts and groans are longer, louder.]

Jesus fucking Christ, Freddy.

[Huffing and puffing.]

You fucking know.

[....that absolutely didn't sound like a whine. No sir. Damn, Dimick. He's not even fucking you just yet. He swallows.]

S'good [fucking great] but I want your dick.
whitetwoguns: (Wasting time)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-21 11:23 pm (UTC)(link)
[Larry leans into the wall, cheek resting on his arm. That swift and easy pass at his prostate makes him take nip of his own flesh. He feels like he's a fucking instrument played by a master.]

Don't take too long. [He pushes off of the wall to stand back against the wall and slick back his hair.] I might cool down.

[Fat chance he would but the kid has him tuned, primed and ready for the real show. He's watching you Freddy.]

Then you'll wish you had me while I was still hot.
whitetwoguns: (People Are Strange)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-21 11:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Smart ass.

[Now he stands under the running water watching the kid navigate his way to the stash with eager eyes. This fucking kid.]

What the fuck do you think?

[Brown eyes purposely take their time drifting down to watch the way his fist glides up and down. Know what? He'll do the same though keep his grip loose on his cock, saving the best for Freddy.]
whitetwoguns: (Anyway the wind blows)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-22 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
Go ahead, tough guy. Show me what you got.

[Please. Palms against the wall and hips out and oh so receptive to his directing touch.]

Or is big talk all you have?

[Larry's breath hitches and he almost holds it feeling the head almost breech.]
whitetwoguns: (Inappropriate Table Conversation)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-22 12:15 am (UTC)(link)
[Elbows to the wall now. Larry swallows hard. How long can he keep up his own tough guy persona? The kid has had him going since that bite to the neck on the street.]

Kid.

[He'll relinquish one arm to go back and reach to squeeze Freddy's ass and try to press him deeper.]

Fuck. You're killin' me. C'mon. Just-[frustrated sigh] just fuck me.
whitetwoguns: (Dream Weaver)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-22 01:35 am (UTC)(link)
[Goddamn this fucking kid. That grin makes him want to try and stick it out longer. But the cock pummeling his insides assures it won't go down like that.]

Yes. Like that. [Clipped speech because he's savoring how open and ready his body is.] Don't fucking stop this time.

[There. He said it and loudly at that. Pomp and Circumstance would have started if they were in their old apartment. Some shit like that. The walls are made of thicker stuff. Thank goodness for that. Larry'd be falling through a hole in the tile, no doubt about it.

Teeth once again that started the fire.]
whitetwoguns: (Under Pressure)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-22 02:19 am (UTC)(link)
[The only reason why his hand is still on Freddy as he's going at him in such a pace is because he's about clawing him. It's fitting with the bites. They don't hurt, not really. In fact it feels like his blood is beating hotter in the kids mouth. The old man looks down and watches his cock bob with their motion. He wants to touch it but not enough to distract from what a fucking pace they've got. And from where Freddy stands he's hitting him right where he wants it the most.]

Oh God. That's it.

[Nothing to hold back he moans at each pass.]

I'm gonna fucking blow.

[His balls feel tight enough. All that attention then nothing at all. It all can't be water on his dick.]
whitetwoguns: (Charles Bronson in the Great Escape)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-22 02:43 am (UTC)(link)
[He audibly shudders at the touch of his hand on his cock.]

Every damn piece of me. [The man can't think. Otherwise he'd have selected words that didn't sounds so sentimental. Freddy's rendered him brainless.]

Baby you got me so--[both arms want to clutch him but if Larry doesn't want to slam face first into those pretty, fancy tiles he'll have to deal. That's okay. That tanned, thick body of his won't be compromised much longer. His head tilts back to Freddy's shoulder as he comes.]
whitetwoguns: (Take a fall take a shot)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-22 02:57 am (UTC)(link)
[Freddy could at this very moment and the old man wouldn't even begrudge him. Needless to say this new guy Mr. Orange worked damn hard to get to where he is in more damn ways than one. Sometimes Larry forgets it's a climb from his end too, maybe even more so. Mr. White is his first real go too.

Arm around him, hand around him and still inside him the old man knows the kid's got him. The whole damn load is over Freddy's fingertips and the tile, running down and mixing with the water. It'll wash away in seconds.]


Freddy. Baby. [The words almost run together. His high hasn't diminished entirely. There's only one thing missing.] Come in my ass.
whitetwoguns: (Dream Weaver)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-22 03:34 am (UTC)(link)
I wanna feel it.

[Forty two years old, scarred, wrinkled, smelling like cigarettes none of that matters because he feels beautiful when the kid tells him so. Larry's his man. He might call the shots, put his money down, but he's just as much Freddy's as Freddy is his.]

Give it to me.

[Larry moves his fingers into Freddy's hair holding him against his shoulder. That hot flow of semen gets him shivering.]

That's it. That's my baby.
whitetwoguns: (Take a fall take a shot)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-06-22 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
So good.

[With a less frantic pace, the old man holds himself off of the wall with his elbows. One paw in his hair, one paw on his ass.]

Goddamn right you are my baby.

[Larry grinds back lazily in his way. He feels drugged and it's great. Here's his own personal heroin.]

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