orangetoughguy: (grease is the word)
Mr. Orange (Freddy Newendyke) ([personal profile] orangetoughguy) wrote2010-08-05 05:20 am
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log post II


third person narrative, action bracket spam, anything goes
log post I | log post II | log post III
whitetwoguns: (Tobi Wong? Fucking Charlie Chan)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 01:52 am (UTC)(link)
I dunno. May as well give it a go.

[This time around he's easier to smile. Into the car they go.]

I dunno if you know but it comes in flavors. [May as well get something that is like-able if they're both gonna end up keeping it in the house for a long time.]

Nothin'. I thought I saw something. It's nothing.

[One more look around and Larry starts the car.]
whitetwoguns: (Madonna songs)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 02:11 am (UTC)(link)
[Larry adjusts the mirrors just a bit. He could have easily been checking out his reflection.]

Maybe. Could have been anybody though.

[Besides, they're in a car. It'll be a cinch to lose em. Away they go.]

No one I recognize.

[Not really anyway. But sometimes you get the feelin' you're being watched. A left, a right and a left and Larry feels like they're in the clear.]
whitetwoguns: (Whadda you mean you don't tip?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 02:44 am (UTC)(link)
Don't talk shit about my shirt. It's a fuckin' classic.

[As classic as Tommy Bahamas gets. It's an off day, no suit required. He's tense about his shoulders and that's got nothing to do with being oggled that way.

His beaky nosed, flannel wearing passenger is a decent sight to see. If Freddy were feeling better he would be appreciating all that he is...and isn't wearing to the fullest extent.]


Okay. [Swinging right on in to a parking slot, he breaks.]

Want me to go in with you?

[It's too dark for sunglasses to hide the way he looks around again using the mirrors.]
whitetwoguns: (Charles Bronson in the Great Escape)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 02:56 am (UTC)(link)
[Larry'll always see some shades of a rough trade hustler in him no matter what he wears.]

Have it your way then. Get a move on.

[He watches him walk right on into the supermarket. Another look around. You know what? Maybe it'd be a good idea to follow him after all. That would have been a great idea had he thought of it sooner. It'd save him a blow to the head that leaves him reeling, leaning on the car. Lawrence Dimick can honestly say he doesn't know what hit him.]
whitetwoguns: (Grindhouse film)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 03:22 am (UTC)(link)
[Click clack of dress shoes coming up behind you, Freddy.]

There you are.

[That's not affectionate. Though the voice is distinct.]
whitetwoguns: (Don't work with psychos)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 03:26 am (UTC)(link)
[The weight of a paw claps down on his shoulder. Hard.]

Are you ready to go?

[Go but not in the way that Freddy is thinking that is for sure. "Larry" is pulling the man right around.]
whitetwoguns: (Inappropriate Table Conversation)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 03:33 am (UTC)(link)
[His paw doesn't let up one little bit, in fact he is using it like a clamp and is hauling him away from the tea.]

I've been the same. You're the one who's changed.

["Larry" is trying to drag him out the door.]
whitetwoguns: (Rambling man)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
Nothing for once. I'm fine and thinking clearly.

[And he is still bent on pulling him out of the store. Both arms on him now.]

I'm not gonna take no bullshit anymore. Hear me?

[Larry throws his weight into it now.]
whitetwoguns: (Goddamn you Joe)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 04:12 am (UTC)(link)
Get the fuck back here!

[Tally-ho! The chase is on! He may not be the fastest but Freddy doesn't have much of a head start. Rubber drapes slap aside as he clatters behind. Workers rustle here and there with shouts at them to leave. As if they weren't already. It's cold back there.]
whitetwoguns: (Are you a doctor?)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 09:21 am (UTC)(link)
[The alley is sparsely lit. Only a large metal dumpster and smaller garbage cans here and there. No where to truly hide. The old bear is lumbering close behind. Coming up the alley is another figure that practically runs into Freddy.]

Shit is that you?

[Behold! Another old man except this one is in his Hawaiian shirted glory. There might be the gleam of blood coming from his hairline. Nothin' doing though. Freddy's the one running around already not feeling up to snuff.]

Who is it? You get a look at him?
whitetwoguns: (Say the goddman words)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 05:46 pm (UTC)(link)
What the flying fuck?

[That'd be a fancy dance move if it were a different time. Sure enough out of the employee's only door is Lawrence Dimick in a suit. There is no time at all to soak in the weirdness. The man in the suit slows and crosses his arms. He's huffing and puffing as a Larry would to try and catch his breath.]

So this guy is it in the end? Are you serious? [Still catching his breath he manages to spit this out.] No Alabama or not even a Bobby. This? [He gestures to Freddy.] The fuckin' rat.

[Is Freddy still holding onto the original? If he is he can feel him stiffen considerably.]
whitetwoguns: (Thug)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Same. [At least he had been when he was knocked for a loop. Hopefully Freddy can hear that. He tries to keep it as quiet and rushed as he can. After all, from the looks of it, it's him.]

Don't mess with me, you piece of shit. You had your time.

[He tries to off hand check his pockets. That's one gun. The other though is either under the car seat or in the coat of the other Dimick. Fuck.

The clone straightens up. He's breathing easier now and is exuding that professional demeanor to a T.]


After fucking everything. Take care of that, [there he goes again gesturing to Freddy], take care of Pink, take the diamonds and get the fuck out of here. That's the only shit you can count on. You don't need em. Not Joe or Eddie.

[Not only is he spouting bullshit but he knows too much.]
whitetwoguns: (Goddamn you Joe)

[personal profile] whitetwoguns 2011-05-18 06:29 pm (UTC)(link)
[In a snap Two Guns draws his gun. Except the clone is very much the mirrored image of Larry. He is the one who has the missing arm of the set. One gun against the other in the alley way. It makes Larry's stomach turn to be in a three way Mexican stand off again. He knows they need to get out. And fast. The super market folks mighta called security or the police. Who the hell can tell what does and does not constitute the cops.]

Shut up. You dunno a goddamn thing.

[The safety clicks off in surround sound, the acoustics here make it even more ominous.]

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